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I hope Al doesn't do anything bad to Brennan when Phil is at work because I think Phil kind of keeps Al under control at least just a little bit. These sick jerks are acting way to nice to Brennan like they are good friends or something. Then offering him food at the kitchen table like nothing happened and they didn't just kidnap Brennan off the street then beat and rape him the night before. Maybe if Brennan plays along, he will have an opportunity to escape.

I'm so happy to see a new chapter out! it was a great read, I love how realistic everyone in this story is acting, be it brennan or his kidnappers.

I'm really curios about what is to come, while Phil and Al seem to plan to keep him prisoner for a long time, it seems from the start of the story that he does, at some pint, manages to run away and return to his own place, I would really like to know if that is going to happen soon or not?

I hope to see another chapter released soon. thank you for this great story!

I love your story! You have vibrant believable charactors. I can't wait to read more, please update soon!

One piece to the puzzle solved is that Brennan's eyes are brown!

Phil and Al are really creeping me out with the way they are treating poor Brennan. What's up with Phil trying to be 'Mr. Nice Guy' and the way Al was acting all 'Emeril' like cooking in the kitchen?! They are slowly manipulating and bending Brennan to their will by controlling him through addictive drugs along with what they have already done to him.

I love reading the story from Brennan's POV and it's like I am watching it through his eyes.

This story is addictive and chilling!!!

Well, I really don't have anything bad to say about this story. I read the two chapters out twice each and each time I got chills through almost the entire chapter.
the realism in which you describe the extraction of his teeth is absolutly amazing and somewhat terrifiying at the same time, I just can't help feeling bad for Bernnan. it's absolutely amazing.

as someone else here said - I would really like to know how Bernnan looks, I know how hard it is to describe the character who is telling the story without making it sound cheesy, but I think it's a vital piece of information.

I simply adore this story and hope you will release another chapter soon!

I was just checking in to to remind you about your a/n and hope you are able to update this soon.

Chapter 3 of Waiting in the Throes is being written right now, so you can expect it within the next two weeks some time. I don't know beyond each chapter on its own how long things are going to usually take me though- so keep my in your bookmarks and check back!

Thank you,

W.T.

Loved the new chapter, you handled the situation really well. And ouch! Teeth pulling must feel very horrible xO
Curious as to what will happen next! Can't wait to find out :3 Cheers!
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Oh my gosh! I cringed at the part when the guy used pliers to pull out Brennan's molars because it brought
back horrible memories for me of when I had my wisdom teeth pulled. OUCH!!!! The poor kid tries to fight
against them and it's a losing battle. I hope they don't permantly damage him!

I was wondering whether or not Brennan's family turned their backs on him after his ordeal only
because in first chapter there is mention he lives by himself in a condo but never goes out.
I hope they haven't but will wait and find out as story progresses.

This is a very hard to read story due to the fact of what Brennan is being subject to and is
very well written by you. I keep cheering him on for having the courage to fight against
his kidnappers but wince when they beat him and even worse pull out his teeth.

Great but heart wrenching story that I hope you continue writing till the end.

I would like to know what Brennan looks like (his hair color/eyes/height) things like that. Reading this story
makes me want to be more careful about going out late at night alone and be more aware of my surroundings.