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I was pleased Brennan still has some fight left in him and was trying to figure out a way to escape and
cheered him on when he made a bolt for freedom even though Phil caught him. I am wondering whether
the kid at Home Depot might actually report something suspious to the police. I will be curious to
find out later just where Phil and Al actually live and what they do for a living.

I am really hooked on this story and happy that even though they have done terrible things to him his spirit is
still not broken. I am worried about him though because I know this is just the beginning of his torment and he has much more to endure before it's over.

please update, really entertaining fic.

I forgot to ask or didn't catch it, will have to double check, but did you mention whether or not Al and Phil had signaled Brennan out earlier before they kidnapped him or was it just random? Just wondering!

IS IT MAY YET!!!????

Just kidding!!!

I love this story even with what all Brennan is going through and wonder what will happen next. Keep up the good work!!!

poor brennan! can't wait to see what happens

At this point, I am really feeling bad for Brennan even more and can see him starting to give in to his captors. You really know how to bring to life what Brennan is feeling.

Oh, I'm so excited to see an update! I actually think chapters like these are more interesting - it's one thing to write an abduction/rape scene, but there is really so much else that goes on. It's almost more eerie to see Phil "taking care" of him, when they were the ones that abused him so badly in the first place. I wasn't really sure of their intentions before because the intro was a bit vague in the first chapter, but it seems they are planning on keeping him long term? I like how realistic Brennan's reactions are. Shock, terror, pain. Very believable.

Here's hoping you find inspiration and free time to write more soon! :)

I enjoy reading this story from Brennan's view point and the way you are describing in very vivid detail all he is being subject to. So, Phil and Al plan to be keeping Brennan for awhile at least. I wonder if they have done this before and if they did what happened to the other victim. Stolkholm Syndrome!!!!!!

I will check back for update around the first week of May like you mentioned in your author panel.

Good job,

W.T.

uhhh that's a bloody good story so far! i`m curious where you'll take it. especially with the given summary and the beginning of the story. keep up the good work!

Well at least this chapter wasn't quite as brutal for Brennan and Phil tried to be 'gentle' with him but Brennan was still store from Al's rape. I am wondering, are Phil and Al brothers or cousins or just friends? They are going to have Brennan so hooked on drugs he won't know whether he's coming or going. I wonder when he will begin to forget about his family & friends.

Be sure to update at the beginning of May like you promised.