rate_review Reviews

Hi new reviewer here and you are doing a magnificant job writing this physiological thriller.
I know by reading the first chapter that Brennan will eventually escape or be rescued
(details yet to be revealed) but I would think that after going through such a harrowing experience
he would have received counseling of some kind to help him deal with it. Also, did his parents
accept (or blame) Brennan for what happened and why isn't he living with them? I know I have to
be patient and wait but just wanted to mention this to you.

Also, will Brennan be meeting someone with whom he will fall in love with and this mystery person
will help him through it?

Ahh, I about squealed when I saw that you updated!! You're doing such an awesome job, seriously. I love how dark and frightening it is - and you treat rape like rape and not something sexy. The way Brennan thinks seems perfectly realistic for a guy in his position. The whole broken wrist thing made me wince, because the poor boy really doesn't need any more injuries! But it certainly illustrates how violent the situation at hand is. I also admit I find it really intriguing how Phil and Al "take care" of him. Just reading it I feel like I'm developing Stockholm Syndrome - I'm hoping inside for the "kind" words and actions that they take, almost to where I think maybe Phil is a nice guy. But of course, then I step back out of the narrative and know exactly what they're doing to him. It's easy to fall into Brennan's thoughts and identify with him, and it makes me wonder where this story is going to go. Is Brennan going to eventually develop some kind of Stockholm Syndrome?

Awesome story. :)

this is awful. when does it get better? when is he going to kill those sick fucks?

I think this might just be my favorite story going on right now, I can't wait for the next update! Maybe I'm weird, but I kinda hope that they all end up together happy in some way. xP

great ch!

Oh my gosh, I am so happy you updated. I have been keeping an eye out for new chapter since the first week of May.

Ouch! What else is going to happen to Brennan, geeze the poor kid. I am thinking now whether or not Phil or possibly Al works at a hosptial. Brennan was giving scrubs to wear. Then the way Phil told Al exactly what to get and how he knew what he was doing when he set Brennan's arm. Hmmm. Yup. I think it's Phil but not sure yet.

I gotta give Brennan credit, the kid doesn't give up easily trying to figure out a way to escape but just how much longer can he hold out?

This story is so mind boggling and the way you are telling it through Brennan's eyes is amazing and so realistic it frightens me.

Hey, I forgot to mention, "Good Luck" with your new job and adjusting to the hours/people and everything that
goes along with it. Hang in there and things will go well for you.

The fact that Phil and Al work just like anyone else and probably have friends/co-workers/customers who think they are great guys makes this story even more nerve wrenching. I wonder what they would think or do knowing these men whom I am sure they trust had kidnapped a young boy and are putting him through hell.

That girl who was found dead that was mentioned on the 24 hour news channel, I am thinking was she possibly killed by Phil and Al and they disposed of the body. I hope they don't tire of Brennan too soon or he might end up in a ditch and left for dead too.

Good job and wonderfully written,

W.T.

Good story so far can't wait to read what comes next. I know due to the first chapter that he escapes but I do hope for his sake that it will be soon.

I am so happy you uploaded new chapter like you promised you would. "Thank you!"

I have to say that this chapter was very well written and intense. I actually cried for Brennan
when he said to Phil "Please let me go home, I want to go home." Holy cow, that really hit me and I
wanted to try and comfort Brennan somehow.

I am worried now what they plan on doing with Brennan once they tire of him even though I know it won't
be for a long while yet.

Thanks for writing such nice long chapters and they sure are well written.