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THIS. made my fucking weekend. and the chance of having another chapter within the week? -- im already looking forward to MONDAY.
I LOVE this story!
I am very eagerly awaiting the next chapter~<3

Ugh. "Make your "lover" happy" That was such an awful intentional comment to make. That's not what a lover should do and the pair of them are so delusional. I just want Brennan to get out very, very quickly at this point. After what just happened, I wonder how Brennan's physical health is going to play a part, as his mental health is already going to keep going downhill. This is such a heart wrenching read.
As I stated before, dreading and looking forward to the next chapter.

oh my god the horrors brennan goes through, the torture... how can these men be so evil and feel absolutely nothing for him?? it makes you want to just hug brennan. the double rape oh my godddddd even reading that made me cringe at the thought of the pain, no, AGONY that would have been. looking forward to the next update, i LOVE how long your updates are it's brilliant. still looking forward to the guests and wondering what kind of condition brennan's going to be in after this ordeal..

I can't begin to keep telling you how much I am hooked on this story due to your fabulous writing technique and feel for Brennan with all my heart. Al and Phil are certainly doing their best to brainwash and mold Brennan into being their boy sex slave/toy. This story is so realistic and gut wrenching. He's fighting them but how much longer can he hold out. I am thrilled you mentioned under your author panel that you are already busy writing next chapter and may post it before the week is up. I will keep an eye out for it because I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Another incredible chapter... you're so wonderful at incorporating the little things that make this situation truly scary. The not being able to breathe, the sickness from anxiety, overwhelming smells and tastes that wouldn't normally bother him, I feel like I'm there with Brennan. I can believe they double penetrated him so early! Holy crap, and Phil was saying he wanted to go slow? Maybe it was because they were high and not using great judgment...? Ah, it gives me shivers. I know you said things will get better for Brennan and I sure hope so, but I'm still kinda hoping this dramatic stuff doesn't end soon... I like it in a terribly masochistic way. It keeps me figuratively biting my finger nails and stuff. I mean, I hope Brennan will be saved and get lots of therapy and stuff, but I kinda don't want him to yet. haha, if that makes sense. I suppose he's going to be with Phil and Al for awhile... and I hope he's still able to resist a bit, but seriously after that violent double penetrative rape I'm trying to imagine him more freaked out and terrified than he was before, and it's not pretty! And he already took his Oxycodone for the day, ouch. Poor Brennan! Hang in there, buddy! Oh, one quick formatting note, I noticed sometimes your paragraphs were indented and sometimes they weren't. Not that it even came close to affecting my enjoyment of the story but just so you know, if you want to keep the format neat and consistent. Reallllly hoping to see an update soon!

Wah! Cilff hanger on the last chapter! Darn. I really like your story so far. Cant wait to see it progress!
I keep thinking how he's going to get out of this situation, but i love reading about it!! hahah.

Yay an update! the visitors will be interesting! update soon!

I started reading your story a yesterday and I just couldn't stop I really hope you update this story fast because I can wait to see what happen next to Brandon

I'm totally riveted by this story. It's tense and frightening and incredibly well written. I'm impressed by Brennon's internal dialogue, it's very realistic - his confusion, his fear and his desperate attempts to figure a way out of the situation, and I'm terrified by Phil and Al. I want to know more about their story, about what they want and how they came to be doing this, but I like the way that information is coming out slowly, in bits in the course of events. Phil's particularly scary - the way he can seem almost concerned, combined with his being so incredibly cold - brutal even.

Anyway, I can't wait for you to continue.

I just came online and was checking latest stories that have been updated and found you had posted new chapter.

Thank you!!!!

I've missed it and have been wanting to know what is happening to Brennan but you have filled that void and I am happy now!!!!

Phil and Al are giving Brennan a little more 'freedom' so maybe Brennan can bide his time until he finds a way to escape. I am glad they went a little easier on him in this chapter.

I am content now for a while until you post next chapter. I hope you can update weekly or bi-weekly but not more than that because the waiting kills me.