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Nice new chapter!
It was a tease though! What will happen next i wonder? You always have me guessing. I'm wondering how and when he will escape... or be rescued. Not rushing you though, i love reading about his situation now ^_^ I wonder if anyone has noticed he's gone or is searching. Hmm. Anyway, well done! I'm glad he got to stab Al haha.
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dude if i were brennan i'd be kicking myself for not finding that key, since it seems like it was in/around the room (or the bathroom?). i also probably would've strangled Al while Al was sleeping/knocked out but i guess not everyone is that mean. XD

yeah, why doesn't brennan just try to kill the two men or something? that'd be wayyy easier...
poor guy

Ooh, I was definitely getting anxious for this next chapter and was so ecstatic to see an update! This story is an edge-of-your-seat thriller and it is incredibly difficult to have to wait for the next chapter after finishing the one you just read! But wow, I really have to compliment your writing ability. Your narration is always so smooth and informed, and the storytelling is just perfect. At the beginning of this chapter I wasn't sure if we were looking at a flashback, but it all tied perfectly together when Brennan woke up to Al. Excellent, being able to see a glimpse of his "former life." I kind of was imagining Brennan a bit of a party-loving and social guy. Though Sam seems to be his best friend, his experience with pot and various encounters with guys and girls makes me think even if he wasn't the most popular guy, he was liked enough and went out for fun often enough. It's kind of interesting. A lot of these types of stories that aim for a gay protagonist opt for the quiet, wallflower type of person, but I love how you're constructing Brennan. I was impressed when he stabbed Al with the syringe and was smiling during it. Though I have to admit, I still don't want him to escape anytime soon. The dynamics and setting with Al and Phil are just so interesting and there are so many possibilities, it would kind of seem like a waste if he was rescued after just a couple days. Though, I am a little merciful in my hoping that he's not physically maimed anymore, haha... the teeth, the arm, he's really just not getting a break. The whole locked in the horse stall in the barn is really terrifying, love it. I am, in a very morbid way, super curious as to what the "punishment" will be, since it seems being locked there and gagged all day probably won't be enough to satiate Phil and Al. I am glad though that Brennan still has the courage to resist, even with how so realistically scary and devastating the situation is. I am also still insanely curious about what Phil and Al do. Maybe Phil's a farmer...? Anyway, thanks for keeping at this story! Love it to pieces.

Love it! Of course I don't want it to be long between updates, but whenever you start reading a chapter: BAM! YOu're right back in... well, this time, with that start, it threw me off a bit at first but it was really effective, and made the reality of his situation so much harsher... Am I a terrible person for wanting more of this? Maybe, but I don't care... ;)

please let him get out of there, like now!

I'm proud of Brennan for not giving up and literally giving that asshole a taste of his own medicine. As long as he escapes, it won't blow up in his face.
...but doing it was still worth it. Go Brennan!

I hope that Zach eventually enters the story as a main character who will be there for Brennan later during his recovery after he is rescued or escapes. Wouldn't it be neat if he is the one who possibly rescues him!

Anway, I like that Brennan hasn't given up (and is still trying to fight his way out) but am really worried about him now and am wondering how Phil and Al are going to punish him. I don't think Brennan is going to like whatever they have planned.

Thanks for updating and I always keep an eye on your author page for update news.

Oh my gosh, for a moment there I thought Al was going to kill Brennan and then have to explain it to Phil. After Brennan fought him like that, I cheered him on but then though to myself.... Oh no, what if they have a chainsaw in the barn or something horrible like that. I was even thinking, NO, they might kill him then grab some other kid who won't be as difficult and easier to handle. But then again, I think they really LIKE Brennan especially when he has attitude because it gives them cause to torture him even more.

Can't wait for the next update! i check up here almost every day :)

I was wondering if the guys are going to use stuff like butt plugs, vibrators, nipple clamps, cock rings and various other toys on the kid. You are going a great job writing this kind of story and it's so real and everything. Amazing. I am hooked on it so keep writing and hope to see more of your stories up in the future.