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Wow, I think we've all already realised that these men are fucked up but this chapter really shows just how fucked up they are, I felt everything Brennan felt. I wonder if Al is starting to feel bad or regret the whole thing? The cliffy is painful! looking forward to next update~

Wow that was an amazing chapter!!!!! So they decided to just break him wow!!!

I sooo look forward to your next chapter

I loved it!!!! So, Phil is tring to break Brennan so he's easier to handle for Al. Very interesting twist.

It didn't seem to me like it worked though, so I think he has to continue to stay in the barn and be 'trained' by Phil. I liked the use of the plug and the vibrator. I hope he uses more of his toys on Brennan.

I do feel bad for Brennan but am getting a thrill by what he is be subjected to. I can't believe I said that. I hope he ends up staying with them for a long time until he gets his freedom back.

I've noticed you've gotten tons of new reviews so hope that will motivate you to update story at lease once a week.

Regardless, I am not going anywhere until this story is finished. I hope it's nice and long. I want to read more and hope that you write other stories just like this in the future.

I forgot to mention in my previous review that I also hope Brennan starts to 'enjoy' and begins to experience some sort of pleasure from what Phil is doing to him.

Wow the story is juat amazing!!!! But poor poor Brennan^^ I really pity him!!! He really should just obey that would make his new life way easier!!! But at least thanks to the prologue we know that he will get out there someday!!!! I really hope somebody finds him soon or Al breaks beause otherwise he is probaly just going insane at some point!!! Poor guy!!!! Anyway thank you a lot for this great story!!!! See you soon!!!

I wasn't sure if I would like this story but find myself drawn into Brennan's new life with Phil and Al. Please keep it up and continue the good work.

I've really enjoyed reading this story and want to thank you for sharing it. It's been a fun thrill ride. I am sadly
disappointed you don't update on a regular schedule but understand. I hope some day you find the time to finish Brennan's story and that it has a happy ending. You are one of the few authors' on this site who is lucky enough to get rave reviews from faithful readers and I hope you don't lose them by these long absences.

Take care and good luck,

W.T.

oh man. oh man. I'm seriously starting to feel bad for Brennan, not sorry enough to grovel here through a review to compel - beg you for the torture to end - no where near close enough:)
But more and more I feel like I am playing a dangerous waiting game; with every word I read I am expecting Brennan to break, to completely and utterly give up hope.
And dare I say it, but I'm also getting a little inkling that perhaps Al isn't the dick I though he was... (Phil and Al have certainly seemed to have switched places for me).
I don't know how you do it chapter after chapter, but you leave me giddy with longing and want for the next chapter, without even a hint of bitterness at your horribly-brilliant cliffhangers. Which I must say you are a master of.

I will continue to check everyday for an info (and chapter) update - it's the only thing that keeps me surviving the wait - because those short little blurbs you leave us with; are a delicious tantalizing promise of an incoming update.

Now is it Al's foot steps approaching our poor Brennan? :)

I was expecting something bad but Phil really out did himself and what the hecks up with Al? It's like they had a role reversal or something. I really feel horrible for Brennan and everything he's going through but something deep
inside of me is kind of enjoying his torment. I really must be sick. I hope he isn't rescued too soon because I like all the crazy stuff they are doing to him. It's so emotional and everything. I wonder why Phil didn't leave one of the butt plugs in Brennan's butt because that would have driven him really nuts especially a vibrator.

I won't hold my breath hoping for anther new chapter because I will suffocate and then I wouldn't be able to find out what happens to Brennan next. I will just continue to keep my fingers crossed that you will have mercy on me and maybe surprise me with another update really soon. Then, I might have a heart attack, LOL.

I noticed on your author's panel you said chapter 10 was updated so you might want to fix that.

Seriously though, please consider updating at least by weekly or something so I don't have to suffer anymore. OK? Pretty Please? I am begging you.

Jesus fucking...there aren't proper words to describe the terror and how awful those men are (though, you manage it quite well ;-))! It's just...buh. I'm a naturally sensitive person and I had to take breaks from reading the rape and torture scene. You do an extremely excellent, amazing, super fantastic -insert more adjectives here- job of writing the scenes. I can't say enough how well-written this is. Now, onto the actual review of this chapter...it's becoming more and more obvious that if one of them were to let Brennen go, it would be Al. I'm not completely convinced that, that's how it will happen, but he seems to not want to go too deep into the kink/rape that Phil does. I'm seeing him as letting the actions in this chapter happen because he's desperate for Brennen to "get it." he obviously has some sympathy for Brennen, so I'm actually curious how he and Phil came to be together.
Also, the wait is worth it. Good luck on your next chapter