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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the note in your author panel about your PC problems!! I am so happy you backed up chapter 10!!!! I just wanted to mention but I am sure you know this already that you can always use the computer at your local library too. Our library has 3 computers for public use.
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon I really wanna know what happens
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your writing drew me to keep on reading even though I was absolutely repulsed by what is happening to the narrator. I understand that some people may even develop feeling for the rapists and find Brennan's ordeal exciting. But I think it would be truly sad if the narrator loses the will to fight against and succumbs (physically and mentally) to these people who have such deformed nature and lack of morals. Your writing is however very engaging, and I hope with every ounce of my being that some sort of justice will be done and that Brennan escapes his captors as fast as possible.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story by accident and must admit that I am totally engrossed by it. It's extremely gritty and truly brilliant. I just read through all your reviews and it's amazing at the range of emotions this story has invoked. I am rooting for Brennan and although I dislike Al and Phil, I do not wish them dead. They are sick and need help. It's nice to find a story that an author has given so much thought to and in the long run has come out a winner.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
im starting to get the feeling he's going to die there.... i really don't want him to give into them....they're crazy....please kill them....with as much pain as pausiable. I can't remember if this him looking back or what but....i really want him to be save and return home...please don't make him a slave.
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo well written. Thank you for the update!!! Are the readers developing a Stockholm syndrome towards Al??? He is as bad as Phil in my opinion. I really feel bad for Brennan, I want both of those rapist to die an awful death.
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is sinfully addictive and I am craving more of the BDSM part of story. Maybe a collar would be an added nice touch too.
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is horribly addictive, I feel horrible for Brennan. Usually I would avoid such a depressive story but Waiting in the Throes is phenomenally well written and I'm a sucker for most anything well written.
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Intense. I sort of hope his captors die horrible deaths.
If bren ever gets the upper hand i hope he squeezes everything he can out of it.
If bren ever gets the upper hand i hope he squeezes everything he can out of it.
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dudeee also i just read through some of your reviews and i must say, don't ever feel pressured to update faster!
take your time. people are impatient but they will wait and watch for updates if they really like your story. personally i think you are one of the more consistent authors who update stuff on this website. some authors take 2-3 months before they update their stories. it's not like you're getting paid to do this anyway, so no pressure!
take your time and enjoy the writing. i've really enjoyed what you've shared with us so far. sort of makes me want to write some torture fiction XD although i'm more partial to pleasurable yet degrading sex torture. not painful sex torture. lol
take your time. people are impatient but they will wait and watch for updates if they really like your story. personally i think you are one of the more consistent authors who update stuff on this website. some authors take 2-3 months before they update their stories. it's not like you're getting paid to do this anyway, so no pressure!
take your time and enjoy the writing. i've really enjoyed what you've shared with us so far. sort of makes me want to write some torture fiction XD although i'm more partial to pleasurable yet degrading sex torture. not painful sex torture. lol