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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE ***** SOBS ****** I AM BEGGING YOU **** It did disturb me but I am not faint of heart so that doesn't apply to me ***** I just don't want Brennan brutalized to the point of no return, If you know what I mean.
A huge round of applause for another outstanding chapter * clap, clap, clap,* cheers!
A huge round of applause for another outstanding chapter * clap, clap, clap,* cheers!
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really believed for a moment that Phil was actually going to break the boy's fingers like he swore he would but am grateful he didn't. I enjoyed this longish chapter so very very very much and it met all my fantasies. I look forward to reading what is next so get going on writing it ASAP!
I command you!!!!!
I command you!!!!!
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still here, still holding out for the light at the end of the tunnel. Powerful stuff, but I think I need to go read something happy now. I'm talking like Care Bears level of happiness.
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I changed my mind about Phil and now want him to die a horrible death hopefully at the hands of Brennan. I still don't think I want Al dead but that depends on his future actions.
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think that your reviewer called, A person, is really confused! Any reader can see your profile (that's how we check for update news, dah!) but only your email is hidden. They could have at least left a review instead of just making a comment that you put your profile on private so weirdo's can't look at it!!!!! I think that reviewer has insulted us all, grrrrrr!!!!
Hey, A person, just because we all are enjoying reading this story it does not make us weirdo's. We know it's just a story and a good one at that. Relax and enjoy it like the rest of us!! We know it will have a happy ending for Brennan too.
Sorry, Maddox, I just had to get that off my chest.
Hey, A person, just because we all are enjoying reading this story it does not make us weirdo's. We know it's just a story and a good one at that. Relax and enjoy it like the rest of us!! We know it will have a happy ending for Brennan too.
Sorry, Maddox, I just had to get that off my chest.
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel really stupid and want to apologize to, A reader, because I just went further back reading over your reviews again and he/she left some really awesome ones for your story.
Sorry and begs forgiveness!
Signing off now until next update.....................
Sorry and begs forgiveness!
Signing off now until next update.....................
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would like to clarify that if you read the chapter, I was referring to the fact Phil looked up Brennan's facebook. T_T If Brennan had simply put it on private no one would have seen anything hence why I said what I said. I wasn't referring to the wonderful Maddox Grey or people on this site XD Just phil. And Facebook. I promise.
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September 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
T_T I totally forgot to add something to my previous...sry Maddox! You must be getting tried seeing me having to finish my reviews! I just wanted to say that I thought the whole facebook thing was pretty clever. I thought it shed a lot more light on Phil and actually knowing about Brennan's previous...er...life...>> I don't know how else to say that. :D It was well done. And that's okay dazeandconfused, it was my fault for not clarifying what in god's name I was talking about XD
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope whoever is walking into the stall uses another vibrator with butt plug, nipples clamps and the cock ring on Brennan. I also like the use of the ball gag. If it is Phil who does this, then maybe Al will come later to vist the boy and by that time Brennan will be so broken that he will see Al as his savior and do anything he wishes from now on.
Delicious story and I am enjoying it very much.
Delicious story and I am enjoying it very much.
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Er, this is why you put your profile on private...o.o...so weirdos can't look at it.