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Just wondering how chapter 11 is progressing and whether or not you have started writing it yet! Consider me to be a bee buzzing around and chasing you to get you started on it just in case you haven't already.

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Ahh! This is one of the worse cliffhangers I've ever read in awhile! You have GOT TO update soon, okay? Go get to writing right away! Okay?! Please? :'( lol

By the way, I love this story even though every chapter I'm both hoping he'll escape or better, be found, and hoping he wont at the same time-- because then the story will be over! XD

I Think I've been mind raped...and feel conflicted emotions about continueing this...I'm a pretty optimistic person so I keep hoping the situaition will Somehow turn to the better, but it has only gone deeper into the madness of these psycotic men.I get that the purpose of them doing this is to gain control and power over him, but this is too much...WTF have I gotten myself into!!! Though the futher I read I couldn't stop. Even though I had to skip most of the parts and keep saying to myself I can't read anymore, I just have to know what happens! Thats fucked up!! And I would kill Phil! Stab him a thousand times over and over till it was just a something that resembled roadkill (ok so i really wouldn't...)It's funny how nonviolent people can suddenly think things like "i could kill" when faced in a life and death situation or one as this to perserve their life. Even I the reader feel that need...it sux. I wonder what's going through Al's mind as well...who is the ringleader, who is the nicer, kinder one? I thought he might start growing a concious or something (HIS A NURSE FOR FUCKS SAKES!!) but that doesn't same to be the case...~sigh~ I hope we've gotten through the rough and very very vicious part to a happier place (but really what happy place could possibly be there in a abuction... I am anxiously and dreaaaadfully awaiting your next update...

I bet you are getting sick of my reviews by now! Anway, I just read all the chapters again (yes for like the millionth time) and was thinking that poor Brennan wouldn't be going through this hell right now if he went along with Al and Phil (no matter how disgusting they are) until they trusted him (Brennan could have turned their game around and have been the one controlling them) then maybe after a while when they thought Brennan was enjoying it or something he could get a chance to use the phone in the kitchen.

Anway, I still like the direction you are taking the story even though I feel really bad for Brennan. I like it.
I also like reading your reviews, as you know, and saw another one left by a reviewer called 'Somebody'.
I don't agree with them that the story is boring and repetitive and that nothing new is happening or by being mislead by the summary. It's not true and 'Somebody' must be reading a different version or something. It's a thill ride and the first chapter explains what is happening according to the summary. Yes, right now it's all about Brennan' abduction but later it will all fall in place with where you left off at the beginning of chapter 1.

Ok, that's all for now, gotta run out for a while.

What a horrifying chapter! I was like in a trance when reading it and even with the warning at beginning of chapter I just couldn't stop from going on to the end.

It's like Phil is playing bad cop and Al nice one or something like that.

That whole facebook and family and friend conversation that Phil had with Brennan was very chilling and scarey.

I don't know what to say except I really feel horrible for Brennan and what the monster is doing to him.

You do an awesome job writing on a subject such as this and it's wonderful.

omd pooooor brennan can his torture end pleeease and really can somebody survive all that pain and all that bleeding !!
aarrrggghhhh i can't wait i wana know what will happen please finish it fast T.T

A person, thanks so much for understanding and forgiving me. I can be such a dumb dumb sometimes!!!

It makes senses now what you mentioned and the bit about Brennan's facebook page and all.

I have the feeling that both brennan and the readers are falling into Al trap. He's playing the nice guy so that Brennan will feel like he would be safe if he stayed with him. That's how stockolm syndrome starts, you feel like you have to earn your jailor kindess and that if he punishes or hurt you it's because you are a bad person, when he reality there is no real reason for him to hurt you at all. Brennan is slowly accepting his situation, and that's really frightening. Phil is totally out of his mind by the way, Brennan can't possibly last another week with them with this kind of treatment, he's gonna die from a nasty infection or a pneumonia. They need to calm down because I'm at my limit and I thought I had a good stomach, but this story is so addictive. I'm looking forward your blog.

I'll be honest, this story is interesting, but it's getting boring and repetitive. Nothing new is happening. Plus I feel a little mislead by the summary.

The description of the story: "Brennan knows there is a world outside of his apartment, but he has been prisoner in his own home, since his abduction, unable to muster enough strength to venture outside or he would realize, not everything out there is as bad as it seems."

But that is not the plot at all. Right now the story is entirely about the abduction.

Omg chapter 10 was intense keep writing please I want to know what happens next :}