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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter, just wanted to point something out....
So...here, you say Brennan has been there one week?
“It’s a long story, but as of tomorrow, he’s been here a week.” One week. It had been five nights since I had slept in my own bed, eaten my own food, talked to anyone I knew. It wasn’t that I hadn’t been keeping track of time, but hearing someone else say “one week” made my situation so unbearably real. My head spun. Six weeks ago, what had I done six weeks ago, six days ago to deserve this?"
but then....you repeat the information as if Richard has asked before that point?
"So, how long has he been here now? Five, six days?” Richard asked.
“A week tomorrow,” Phil replied. Richard nodded.
“A week and he already has a broken arm?” Richard asked incredulously. He turned to look in my direction, one eyebrow slightly raised, visible from behind his glasses."
So...here, you say Brennan has been there one week?
“It’s a long story, but as of tomorrow, he’s been here a week.” One week. It had been five nights since I had slept in my own bed, eaten my own food, talked to anyone I knew. It wasn’t that I hadn’t been keeping track of time, but hearing someone else say “one week” made my situation so unbearably real. My head spun. Six weeks ago, what had I done six weeks ago, six days ago to deserve this?"
but then....you repeat the information as if Richard has asked before that point?
"So, how long has he been here now? Five, six days?” Richard asked.
“A week tomorrow,” Phil replied. Richard nodded.
“A week and he already has a broken arm?” Richard asked incredulously. He turned to look in my direction, one eyebrow slightly raised, visible from behind his glasses."
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was recently rec'd on Livejournal - I have to say, it's nice to find something dark and plotty for a change. I'm tired of boring, predictable m/m romance stories.
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Richard really frightens me and wonder if his wife (If he's married, but think he is because of band on finger Brennan noticed.) is part of this group of elite people who are kidnapping young people off the street and keeping them as sex slaves.
I like Jason too and hope that he escapes and finds peace. Suicide? Brennan, NO!!!! Please don't give up hope.
I hope that Phil doesn't decided to put one of the ankle bracelet monitor on Brennan so they can keep track of him should he run away. But, again, I am surprised Richard hasn't come up with that idea yet.
Al was surprisingly different and I kind of liked it.
I would like to read Jason's story too but only after you finish Brennan's.
I like Jason too and hope that he escapes and finds peace. Suicide? Brennan, NO!!!! Please don't give up hope.
I hope that Phil doesn't decided to put one of the ankle bracelet monitor on Brennan so they can keep track of him should he run away. But, again, I am surprised Richard hasn't come up with that idea yet.
Al was surprisingly different and I kind of liked it.
I would like to read Jason's story too but only after you finish Brennan's.
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*tears up* what a dispicable story and yet I read it, I know from the first chapter he gets away, I want Brennan rescued and I want to see his life happy not this mess where he's to scared to go outside, although I can completly understand. Man too sad, I don't like to hurt people I'm a pacifist but I want those two in prison for a verrrrrrrryyyyyy long time with the same pshyco's like them. I will read your new chapters when you update as much as my stomach clenches and my mind screams 'No, what's going to happen to Brennan now?' I keep reading hoping that he'll escape!
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sooo chapter 11...WOOOT!! This is the only story I keep track of now, wow I'm stil collecting my thoughts...um so Jason...his goooood. He found a way to fool Richard(and who even knows if Richard is completely fooled, these guys are smart)To see after 3 years he still has a bit of fight in him, he has held on to some part of him while also being able to be cut off when he needs to be I think is pretty amazing. That is something Brennan should have picked up long ago (although it's in our nature and our instincts to fight back. Now I'm thinking first comes our instinct to fight, then comes whatever we must do to survive even if that means giving in...or maybe the order differs depending on the person...lol I'm no psychologist) It will deff be awhile before he can escape and though I'm sure Jason makes his situation even more real, atleast he has the comfort of knowing his not alone. (he needs all the help he can get) but he does seem very broken inside AND out. Evertime I read this I wonder what would I do? and ends with the same result I just don't know...you never know what your really capable or not capable of untill you are put in a very dire situation. Anywho great as ever and will wait forever for your next update
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October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is what I'm hoping to see every time I visit this page. Which is once a day... ;) Sure, I read others, other good stories too, but this one... DAMN... It makes my heart beat faster and it makes my stomach clench... but in a good way, you know? I can actually FEEL it... I find myself holding my breath when I'm reading until I gasp for air... ANd I really feel fort he character too.. not only his mind, but his body is so broken.. I want to scream out for them to give him medical attention, damn it! ANd the introduction of the other slave... I wondered if it would be a "happy" slave or not, but this made it so much more real and desperate... gah... Can't wait for more, but will, of course...
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait to see how this progresses
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just when you think you are beginning to understand what's going on things dramatically change. I never saw this coming. I assumed Richard possibly kidnapped Jason (before even meeting them) but this whole deal, exactly what we don't know yet, with a widespread group of others just like Richard, Phil and Al (Alex) really puts an even more darker and twisted theme to the events happening. I just thought Richard was a good friend of Phil's like he had told Brennan but never this scenario.
I never would have even thought that there were more people involved in this. I alway thought it was a random kidnapping thought up by two sick and perverted guys.
It makes the story even more addictive and I can't stop reading it even though things keep getting worse for Brennan.
I am not sure yet about Jason. I know he was abducted too and who knows what he has gone through but there is something about him I just don't trust. Maybe I am wrong, I hope I am, but there is a nagging doubt in the back of my mind that something is off about him.
I know this is awful of me to even mention but I kind of hope Brennan doesn't get away (at least not for a long while) because I want to find out more about these evil people. An even deeper part of me wants to see Brennan get marked just like Jason. Is that sick of me or what?
I am anxiously waiting for your next update and am wondering what kind of influence Richard has on Phil and Al.
I don't know how Jason expects Connor to run when they keep him chained up or one of them is always with him. I am also thinking that Richard is going to be suspicious by how Brandon might be acting after using the bathroom. If he questions Brandon about it when he is this vunerable things could really escalate for the worse and get out of control.
I never would have even thought that there were more people involved in this. I alway thought it was a random kidnapping thought up by two sick and perverted guys.
It makes the story even more addictive and I can't stop reading it even though things keep getting worse for Brennan.
I am not sure yet about Jason. I know he was abducted too and who knows what he has gone through but there is something about him I just don't trust. Maybe I am wrong, I hope I am, but there is a nagging doubt in the back of my mind that something is off about him.
I know this is awful of me to even mention but I kind of hope Brennan doesn't get away (at least not for a long while) because I want to find out more about these evil people. An even deeper part of me wants to see Brennan get marked just like Jason. Is that sick of me or what?
I am anxiously waiting for your next update and am wondering what kind of influence Richard has on Phil and Al.
I don't know how Jason expects Connor to run when they keep him chained up or one of them is always with him. I am also thinking that Richard is going to be suspicious by how Brandon might be acting after using the bathroom. If he questions Brandon about it when he is this vunerable things could really escalate for the worse and get out of control.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story I've read in ages. Chapter 11 is especially chilling with Jason's appearance. The idea that there's a network of people similar to Phil and Al is something I did not expect. I cannot wait to see where things go. Thanks for the amazing work.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeeeeeeeeeesssssssss!!!!!!!!!
A new chapter!!!
wow it's a whole organisation!! I feel for Jason, 3 years with those monsters!!!!! That's horrible!!
This is worse than I thougt, escaping two assholes is one thing but a entire network spread across the country that's nearly impossible. Please tell me this band of rapists will be destroyed by the end of the story.
Run Brennan, run!!!!!
A new chapter!!!
wow it's a whole organisation!! I feel for Jason, 3 years with those monsters!!!!! That's horrible!!
This is worse than I thougt, escaping two assholes is one thing but a entire network spread across the country that's nearly impossible. Please tell me this band of rapists will be destroyed by the end of the story.
Run Brennan, run!!!!!