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there is no hint of a happy ending.... *slumps*

Since you don't have 'death' listed under warnings I hope that means that Jason will also survive otherwise I don't want to read anymore of this. If you plan on having Richard kill him, you should have added a 'death' warning before you knock him off. After all these kids have been subject to, I think they deserve to feel safe and secure again. I am kind of hoping they end up together at the end because they are forming a close bond in unity.

Damn... I wrote this whole huge review but didn't save it. And the site freaked out on me and it didn't go through. Anyway great story, showing my support.

I have to say Al's little talk with Brennan actually chilled me more than anything else in this story yet. I think it's because Al actually seemed crazy then. It's weird, Al and Phil have hurt Brennan so much, but they always seemed rational, cold and fully aware of what they were doing. Sadistic and terrible, yeah, like they were simply getting a kick out of tormenting him. But Al talking about how he followed Brennan, and how he felt Brennan was "the one" to be their perfect sex slave, and his total disconnect - that he might actually think that Brennan would want and enjoy what he was going to do to him. Maybe he's just toying with him and taunting him, maybe Al was a little drunk, too. But it was just, wow. Made me shiver.

Jason is so endearing, how he squeezes Brennan's hand and tries to lighten the mood. I'm pretty paranoid for him and don't know how to interpret Richard's look at the end - what's he thinking? I'm also weirdly curious about what Richard filmed him doing last night. Maybe not knowing makes it even more frightening. I wonder if Jason snaps and loses control around Richard normally, or if he's just affected because of Brennan.

Also Brenann is seriously never going to be able to walk again if Phil and Al don't cut that shit out. If there's bleeding going on during anal sex, you're doing something wrong! I still have honestly no idea if Phil and Al actually think Brennan might get real physical pleasure out of having his insides ripped raw, or if they just don't care/are sadistic and like it hurting him that much. (Moralist aside, that scene was really frightening and brilliant though!) It was nice to see Brennan blow up at Al a little, maybe that was just because he was drunk, though..

How dare you have a real life and not spend all day writing! Just kidding. :) Thanks for finding the time to update when you can. You abandoning this story would be the worst possible thing that could ever happen in all of my life.

(PS, are you ever going to tell us who you would cast in a live action Waiting in the Throes movie?)

I'm so happy!! A new chapter!!! I was starting to think you had forgotten about us. I swear the story gets better with each new chapter!!!

I'm still going to review the chapters I havent' reviewed yet, when I have the time to re-read this story again. Wow reading chapter fourteen, wow. Jason talked about going and visiting more 'pets' Its again sad to think how many more are out there. Your story sends shivers down my spine. And Al talking to Brennan like that was just freaky but ha! I think he made a big mistake following Brennan into college I'm pretty sure there were people around who might have seen Al and Brennan might get rescued because of that. Not sure.... but its fun to theorize.

I somehow wasn't surprised tat Al and Phil broke their word. I'm pretty sure the sick bastards had fun talking to Richard about all the stuff that they are going to do. Sicko's I'm actually happy that Richard isn't married. I hope Brennan keeps his spirit although the paragraph at the whole start of the story seems like Brennans spirit was broken. I'm glad you didn't skip what happened to him though. And I'll look foreward to seeing him when he gets rescued and learning to survive and it might take him a long time to really trust anyone at all. I kind of hoped Brennan and Jason would be rescued and that the two would be together. They've already been conncted because of all the hell both have to endure at the hands of the captors.

I must say I didn't expect Jason to blow up like that. I hadn't got that image of him, and I feel sorry that Richard made him swallow all that soap. It was cruel and yeah he had every right too snap and yell after all he had made a deal and it was really all in vain. What was with the looks at the end. Richard watching Jason gave me a strange sense of foreboding. I look foreward to reading more. This is getting interesting in a stomach-churning way. I've never really read such a heat-breaking tale and this one will have my interest. I hope this story never goes on hiatus because I would really really like to follow it through the end.

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OMG thanks for awnsering my question i was really confuse there but now i see it was just al erm how to put it emotions that took him on the adge in the begining

Maddox, Maddox, Maddox!
You're killing me here!

I feel like I'm in the dark fumbling for a hint, a glimpse of light at the
end of the proverbial tunnel.

I have a niggling feeling that things aren't going to end well for Jason, and it's
kind of killing me inside; cause that kid's got moxie.
He makes me feel that Brennan still has hope...

That scene where Al was telling Brennan about how he was the one, and how he watched him. Chilling.
I felt my stomach squirm in a way that wasn't from the flu.

I'm now stuck wondering how long Brennan's going to be able to keep up with his "good boy" charade, whether he was doing
it solely for Jason's sake that night, or he's seriously listening to Jason's advice - curbed more by Al and Phil's praise for
his change of attitude.

Keep up the good work, and thanks again :)

Oh nooooo. I'm so worried for poor Jason now. D:

Im starting to freak out over this story. Im having really bad daydreams( not really nightmares, since they are during the day ) I cant stop thinking about Brennan...and OMG poor Jason! Its like a bad car crash..you cant NOT look, like I cant NOT read it.
Your writing is awesome, as is your pace. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!