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And once again I screamed when I saw the update. This chapter was sooooo heartbreaking, awful!!!! Damn I can't wait for the freedom part!! You rock!

:( Brennan. I feel sad everytime I read this, and the scene between Jason and him was very upsetting. I feel so bad for both of those boys. The only thing that makes me happy is that at least Brennan gets out. Thank god.

what happend to that plan of escape...

I"m beginning to wish that Brennen and Jason, just get killed in a mega huge explosion that kills those rapists as well....
better just End It ALL, than this torture................

*sobs*

I shall.... i duno what i shall do... this angst is really good in the sense that it is ANGST like crazy man...

Will there ever be a silver lining that shines for at least a whole chapter?

I tried to sign in and leave a review but it was way too confusing with all the recent updates to the site that I gave up, LOL.

I was so happy to see that another new chapter was up, plus as an added surprise, it was even a nice longish one.

Please don't think I am a horrible person but I still don't want Brennan to escape (but at least I know he eventually does just not how it happens) because I want to find out more about Phil and Al. I cried after reading this chapter for both Brennan and Jason. I was happy to find out that Jason hasn't given up and that he (as well as Brennan) discussed important details to give to the police should one of them get away. I am hoping it will be Jason who escapes first and lets the police know about Brennan. That Richard is an evil (pardon the language) sadistic bastard and I am still trying to decide who is worse, him or Phil, but it's a very close tie. I still think there is more to Al and Phil's relationship so wonder how they met and became what they are now. I also want to find out more about this 'kidnapping/slave organization' that they seem to be a part of and does it include other members in different countries? I still think that if Jason or Brennan could only give in and comply (no matter how much they hate it) with their wishes without fighting back that maybe one of them would be able to get away or to a phone and call 911 but knowing Richard and Phil they are probably friends with the local police who possibly may have one or more officers in on this 'cult' and it would backfire on the kids. On the plus side of things, Phil actually is giving Brennan more freedom but I am afraid they are only doing this to test him. I am curious whether the FBI is investigating these disappearances or possibly inflitrating the organization Richard/Phil/Al belong to so they can bring it down.

I was wondering whether Jason was blindfolded in the car or kept in the trunk everytime Richard brings him somewhere like Phil & Al's place. If not, he should be able to tell someone where Brennan is being kept if he later escapes.

I will be worried about Jason after they leave and hope things get better for him and that we find out what happens.

Richard using the butane torch on Jason reminds me of Phil with the screwdriver and how Brennan is petrified everytime he sees it.

When Brennan saw and heard his mother asking him to come home, I felt so bad for him when he started thinking that his parents and the police might start thinking he did run away and wasn't abuducted.

As usual, this chapter was full of deep angst (which sicko that I am love) as well as sexual friction between Jason and Brennan which drove me wild and I wish they could have at least enjoyed it by blocking out their tormentors and just reaching out to each other for comfort.

What will they be doing with the videos of Jason and Brennan?

I will be anxious for future chapters and hope to see more frequent updates when your busy schedule allows it.

I really enjoyed reading this latest chapter,

Katie

Oh Wow, another sad and disturbing chapter. When I saw the update I immediately got excited, but then before I clicked on the new chapter I first made myself a cup of hot tea, then grabbed a warm blanket to help with the chills I always get when reading your story. Neither helped as I found myself immersed in your writting, heart pounding and breaking apart at the same time. Jason and Brennan were truly heartwrenching. Phil Al and Richard are so terrifying. I really want them to be tortured within an inch of their lives. Im really concerned about Brennan though, if Jason is actually more afraid of Phil then he is of Richard, then Im afraid that that sicko Phil is capable of even more then what we have seen already!!! OMG thats a treally scary thought, and all this time I thought that Richard was like a kind-of ring leader, but now Im not so sure. I cant wait for the big escape, or maybe at this rate, I can imagine them letting Brennan go, but keeping him emotionally attached, maybe keeping Jason as collateral so he lets them be in his life somehow, I dont know, Im just starting to feel the emotional turmoil that they are causing Brennan an Jason and Im starting to freak out!!!

Once again.....Great chapter and in case I havent made it clear; MORE PLEASE.

oh, that was heartbreaking. In multiple ways.

I'm so worried for both Brennan and Jason. Brennan's just deteriorating and losing hope on so many levels. I'm beginning to see how Brennan becomes the Brennan we saw at the intro. It unnerves me~

and Jason, poor Jason! Your premise for him in the chapter...I can't think of an appropriate adjective!

You have me antsy in anticipation for -hopefully- their freedom scene. But, I feel so groundless on to when, and how that will happen. It's like trying to make sense of chaos.

But I must say, your Tumblr post is giving me hope that their escape is relatively imminent! So, I'll be looking forward to the next Chapter as always :)

Hi, I was just wondering whether this story is also on 'Hiatus' like your other one called Blood Dance? I took a look at your tumblr page and you haven't mentioned anything about it so I hope not. I will review again once story is completed to let you know how I liked it but I tend to lose track of WIP stories that are not updated on a regular schedule. I just hope that someday when I am online checking that I find it again since this site doesn't have any kind of story alert notification for readers.

This is an amazing and chilling story, simply one of the best I've read in a long time, and I am glad I found it just sad it's not yet complete.

I hope to someday see you writing again and good luck!

You have, through your masterful writing, brought us to a place where we are terribly anxious over the fate or your main character. You need to relieve us with some more of your plotty yet smutty writing.

I just thought I'd let you know I was reading and appreciating, as it's been a long time since your last update. Please don't let this be an eternal WIP...it's too good.

Hey I'm still alive! Still plan on reviewing. My computer was all messed up still is and it is really old so I'm going to by a new one. Sorry about the wait! By the way, I changed my pen name from CrimsonWatersAlien to AlienMasquerade when I was uploaded to the new system/server. So its still me!

(4) Wow, Al is a twisted guy! Both of them are. I find it hard to believe that the guy at home depo would believe the screaming was from a television *shrug* That's just me though. I hated how Al got a bj in the shower and I was actually happy that Brennan threw up, and then when he was running. I was like, yes....Escape Brennan, but unfortuanatly he didn't and ended up seriously injured. I was horrified that Al and Phil fixed Brennan's cast themselves.

AlienMasquerade

5)The storm: I remember a lot of this chapter, I was pissed that they would take away Brennan's clothes as a form of punishment, they've already done so much to him that you think they could at least let him keep his clothes. And they don't want him drugged out they want him fully alert to remember every time they hurt him. To be completly honest I don't know which is sicker. And then telling him if he eats only then he can shower alone!

To make matters worse Phil taking to his friend as if Brennan was not even human was kind of hard to swallow. I already know what's going to happen in the next chapter I'm still going to review every chapter though.

When Al got the strawberry Lube I was thanking dear me, when is this ever going to end. But it still seems to have a way to go. However from reading chapter fourteen it seems like this part of Brennan's life is coming to a close. I hope so.

AlienMasquerade.