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I honestly don't think I can read this anymore- I do find it very intriguing psychologically, but there's only so much torture I can take. The last chapter almost made me really upset- the fact that Brennan nearly gets away but gets caught at the last minute is so frustrating. You're an amazing writer, but 15 chapters of sexual torture is a bit much to read.

you are such a tease I hoped he'd get away T_T

I think they should take him back to the barn and strap him to that table contraption again with the straps and then use electric shock type treatment on him and that would really break him. I do want him to eventually escape but am way to far enjoying his torment right now. I am evil, LOL.

I'm guessing he won't be able to walk or run for a long while.
Let me just say, while reading the scene where Brennan is trying to run and from the moment he saw Phil was one of the more intense scene I've read for a long while. My heart was racing just reading it. I can't wait to find out how Brennan escapes, but I hope it has something to do with putting Phil and Al against each other. They deserve it and more, darn it!
Looking forward to the next update!

I have tried to review this story a while back but it never showed up... I don't know why but this is me trying again. cause I really like this story. no that's a lie, I LOVE this story. I have kind of a kidnap fetish. though it's not really sexual, it just gives me the feeling like i'm on a rollercoaster, not many people have that kinda thing, though I know one person who has it with gunpoint. I prefer the way Al acts over phil though. in fact I would love it if in the next chapter phil wants to do something really drastic and Al stops him. I showed this story to my gunpoint loving friend a while back and ever since we have been acting like fangirls. talking about it all the time, coming up with scenerios and that goes a bit like "oh and than Brennan could cry and beg Al for forgiveness. and phil could comfort him!" "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw, that's so cute"*in the most highpitched voice you ever heard.* we have even kinda written fanfiction for it. just to sent to eachother though... I might be a bad person but unlike everyone else I don't want Brennan to escape, or well I do, eventually but not until like 100 more chapters. also just to let you know. I check this story litarly at least 10 times a day. even today cause I hope you've miraculasly managed to write the rest of the chapter in 1 day... I've read lots of fanfiction and original fiction of any kind but you can be damn sure i've read every single kidnap story that attracted after reading through it fastly and I've been looking for like 3 years straight for those, ever since I discovered fanfiction and realized I could find my special drugs out there. there's lots of kidnap stories that don't work though. it has to be soully about the kidnaper and kidnapee and preferably they have to kinda connect. not exactly fall in love but form a sort of bond. kidnapper has to somewhat sweet to the kidnapee but not the the extent the kidnapee isn't scared anymore, if that happens it's pointless... so my point being I've got over 300 awesome kidnap stories saved in my favourites but this is the very best one. please keep this story going as long as possible! I'm already scared for the day the last chapter is updated...

Maddox!~~~

Agh, when will this torture end!~~~
I was all excited when Brennan got out of the house - my heart was beating so hard I could feel it.
and then...then Phil came.
I wouldn't say my heart stopped, but it felt like lead when he brought Brennan back.
This is just too much~~ I need Brennan to escape, or to be found, or something.

Brilliant as always, I'm looking forward to the next chapters and your new direction.

I am beginning to think that maybe it would be a better idea for both Brennan and Jason to try and escape together, even if only one of them ends up getting away, it would give one or the other a chance to escape and get help. Only, I wouldn't want to think of the consequences for the one left behind, that thought scares me. This whole chapter was very intense especially when Brennan was on the porch watching Phil scrapping the ice off his van and then he turned and their eyes met. It chilled me to the bone. I too hope now that Jason and Brennan end up together because they share a very special bond together and could help one another heal. I am worried that when Phil/Al and Richard are caught that they won't get life and when realeased some day could come back with a vengeance after the boys.

It's nice to see you back writing,

Katie

Maddox, another amazing chapter!!! I was kinda sad when Jason was saying goodby, I like that Brennan had someone in his corner and I like Jason, I hope to hear Jason's story one day too.
I was having a panic attack when Jason met eyes with Phil outside, I was screaming in my head" RUN JASON, RUN...FASTER HURRY' It was really intense.
I love your writing, your pace, keep those chapters coming, please.
What were they doing to Brennan at the end?
Maybe a hint?

i'm so frustrated with him!

why doesn't he just kill Al when Al was sleeping??? grab a knife from the kitchen, sneak back up, slit his throat, then wait for Phil to come in into the house and clobber him on the head

geeze louise he's so stupid.

Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! I can't believe you have finally updated and I am so very happy right now. I've really been missing reading this and finding out what kind of new torment Phil and Al will subject Brennan to.

So, poor Jason is gone now with Richard but Brennan will see him again in the summer when Al & Phil take him on a road trip to visit them. I can't wait for that.

I am slightly confused as to why Brennan didn't just use the telephone that was on the wall in the kitchen beside the fridge and dial 911!? It would have been faster and safer because he could have called and left the phone dangling by it's cord so they could trace the call then he could have sneaked back upstairs until help and rescue came. That way he wouldn't have been seen by Phil outside and Al was still asleep upstairs.

What did they do to him at the end of chapter? I am confused again. Did they brand him or cut one of his archilles heel so he couldn't fun away again?!

This chapter was very intense and I really enjoyed reading it even though poor Brennan suffered alot.

I will try and be patient until next update as long as it doesn't take over another month and a half or so. Pretty please.

You are truly gifted and talented. I have never read such an entertaining piece of fiction like this in all my life. It's one hell of a thrill ride.