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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD.
I can't believe JASON'S the one to escape... I'm literally freaking out over here, I'm so excited to see what happens next.
I can't believe JASON'S the one to escape... I'm literally freaking out over here, I'm so excited to see what happens next.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I seriously was debating as to whether or not I wanted to read anymore but now that I have read this much including the newest chapter today, I can't stop and want more. I never though you could actually pull this off and for it to be so realistic but you have. Good job and I am anxiously awaiting to read more of this intoxicating story.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was so excited after reading this chapter. I loved the ending, how he just laughed.. it was perfect! Thanks for the awesome update.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH....MY.....GOD....
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawd, Brennan, NO!!!!!! Phil is going to kill him!!!!!! I hope Jason finds help and finds it fast!!!! Oh my gawd!!!!!! Did Al deliberatly, let Brennnan find that key? It just seemed way to easy and was not even hidden. Oh my gawd, poor Brennan!!!!!!! I am gonna cry now.
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July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yo, Maddox! Just dropping a note to say "Hi, how ya doing?" I am going on vacation tomorrow and won't be back for two weeks so in case you update while I am away... I just wanted to let you know that's why I haven't reviewed. I'll be leaving in the wee hours of the morn so have to hit the sack or I will sleep in and miss my flight......
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A thrilling chapter as always! I am a little confused about the end of Chapter 19, though -- they're gonna run him a bath when there's no bath in the guest house? Making him walk all the way over to the house for a bath seems pretty cruel for Al, although maybe his in his deranged fantasy brain Brennan is fine with walking right now...
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I wanted to even read the first chapter but once I got going I couldn't stop until I read all of them. I usually don't like stories about kidnapping and rape but have to admit I like this one and am now offically addicted to it. Thanks for writing it and I hope to be able to read the rest some day soon.
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the few but best written stories I've ever read on AFF and I am so glad I found it plus took the time to actually stop and read it! I actually slapped myself for passing it be so many times before. I am happy for Brennan that part one is almost over but I am still going to miss the psychological trauma he was subject to by his kidnappers. I do hope we get to see more of Al and (I hate to admit this) but yes even Phil again (in part 2 or another story) because there is just something about them that I just can't picture them going to jail even though I know it's only right that they do. I am kind of hesitating about reading the next two chapters because I know it will be over but yet again I want to read the final part with just as much anticipation to find out what happens to Brennan and everyone else.
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July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to see these kidnappers make a movie with the two boys and then all of them will watch it together.