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SAY. WHAT.
OH MY GOD I should have KNOWN you would do this to us GOD you SADIST ;A;
If I don't have the beginning of part 2 soon I will go MAD. MAD I TELL YOU.
Do you enjoy having such power over us? ;____;

Maddox!

That Cliffhanger, my god. Are you trying to kill me?

The temptation to read the update on my lunch break at work was so very hard to resist, and unwise.
There I was with my IPOD in one hand, fork held suspended with food in the other, squinting at the tiny text.
Trying to eat and control my emotions and facial expression and/or noises was difficult.

But oh man, oh man. PART 1 is done!!!
Yes! Congratulations!
I for one am very excited to move on towards Brennan's rescue, recovery and all of the other wonderful things
you have in store.

Speaking of the rescue - I was surprised that you didn't detail it then and there.
I should know by now that you like to do things a little differently that was is "standard" in terms of a "timeline".
So I'm going to assume it's covered at a later point.
And really, it's not even that big of a thing to me anyway. I'm too giddy with relief that Brennan is finally "free"!
(I've been waiting and hoping for this moment for so long! haha)

Another thing that surprised me was when Brennan attempted to strangle himself with the sheet.
Throughout his entire ordeal I kept thinking to myself that if it were me I would have bit my tongue or something - anything
to just escape.
And so for me Brennan's fortitude on this front was very admirable, although that does not go to say that I have lost
any of that admiration - certainly not. Everyone has a breaking point and you simply showed us his.
Which I must admit, I think is a lot further along than many.
But that just means he's not going to give up now that things are looking up, and we'll get to see how brilliant and wonderful and strong a character Brennan is in the chapters to come.

Congrats again, and thank you for the spectacular chapter!

(ReCAPTCHA's wanting me to break out my umlauts and my Greek symbols..)

Ahhhhhh! Its been SO long. Thank you thank you. He is free right? Please say yes. I'm so excited!!

I'm going to be honest....
I hate bsdm.
I found it sickening....
But I get that some people might think
that this story is hot.
to each their own.
To me it was completely stomach turning.
I had hoped.. he would get to die or escape.
Your writing is top notch.

You a good writer.
I get that there are people
like this in the world.
But... it's so fucking sad

This story is beyond disturbing. It makes me physically sick and I pray that psychos like Richard, Al, Cole and Phil dont really exist. I was hoping that you would let Brenan die and end both our suffering because even if he survives I cant see a happy outcome anymore. It is a compliment to your writing that I cant make myself stop reading every update. I know that I will read it to the end.

Wha...what? going a little crazy here!

I'm not shocked at the violence or the fact that Brennan's being seriously beaten and violently raped. I'm just shocked that Phil was THIS violent in his "snuff film". Like, whaa? I know we're only seeing what Brennan is seeing, but I was a little surprised first that Phil wants to get rid of Brennan. Severity of his "crime" aside, he's still only been with them a few months and who says he isn't still "trainable"? Phil's given up on making Brennan the perfect pet because of that, or was it Richard's influence? It's not like Brennan killed someone, and theoretically Richard is safely on the run with all his rape porn money. Not that I'm trying to negotiate with severely unstable and violent people, but wow. I know Phil is a sadist, and probably capable of killing Brennan if he wants to, but I honestly couldn't see him taking it that far, that was nutso. I probably really shouldn't be surprised, but I guess I was hoping there was a scrap of humanity in Phil because it seemed like even he had his moments of, err, gentleness with Brennan that I couldn't believe was completely manipulation. It feels weird saying that for this kind of story but that's way extreme, especially since it was done with Phil's cold calculation at least weeks (right?) after the incident.

And how could Al allow that to happen? I also wasn't surprised that Al was holding the others back, but we even got a confirmation from Phil that Al didn't want Brennan to be sold or "disposed of". Then... torture to death movie and Al saying his good-byes? I know we don't know everything but why would Al agree to that? I also know that Brennan is pretty unstable now, but at that point if Al was asking me if I loved him I'd be proposing marriage. Or at least gave him some little hope - "another time another place" kind of bullshit that could maybe keep him on my side. Nonetheless, I can't fathom why Al let Phil do that, I don't see what Al gets out of this deal. He is definitely in the place to demand Brennan's life, isn't he? Phil can't overrule him, he can just be angry about it. At least that's what I thought.

The only explanation I have that even slightly redeems Al (and perhaps just a tiny bit Phil, if he agreed) is if Brennan's "final punishment" was to endure the psychological/physical torture of making him believe he's going to die in a snuff film, but the real plan was to drop him off at a hospital afterwards. Al must have been intending to bring him to the hospital... right? That had been my little fan theory before this was posted, that Brennan would get seriously messed up and Al would take him to the hospital. Maybe the police just randomly located them right before Brennan died, but without explanation that seems a little too convenient. I don't know. haha. I'm totally lost.

If I didn't already know that Brennan survives this chapter would've actually been unbearable, even for me, and I can read a lot without batting an eye. I think the knowledge that these people seemed to want nothing more than to torture Brennan to death, like really kill him, rather than hurt him still with the underlying concern for his health and life... If they didn't plan to let Brennan live after the snuff film I'm not really sure how he's still alive. I'm so depressed!!! I don't suppose we could have an early update on the next chapter? Haha... sorry as always for my long comments!!! thanks so much for this story (even if it makes me want to tear out my hair)!

Maddox!!!! How could you do this to me???!!! I was literally freaking out reading this and the only thing that kept me going was knowing Brennan is going to live and eventually heal. I knew it would be bad but this time you have really outdone yourself. I am thinking Al might have caved or broke and contacted the authorites even if it met jail time but not sure. Maybe, what Mint mentioned, they dropped him off at the hospital BUT I find that very hard to believe and don't think Richard or Phil would have gone for that. I think something more dramatic happened and we will hopefully find out what in next chapter. I for one will be partying when Phil and Richard get justice served. I think Al needs psychiatric treatment because he's seriiously delusional. I seriously can't imagine how Brennan could have survived Phil's snuff film especially with the hunting blades and the internal damage they would have inflicted on him. Brennan could have had his lungs/liver/kidney/spleen punctured!!! Now, we know he's with his loved ones in the hosptial but who said; "Hey, look who's awake." I WILL BE STALKING YOUR TUMBLR PAGE OVER THIS, LOL. ~~~~ CTF aka Katie ~~

Oh, you are a very cruel and manipulative plus sadistic author my dear Maddox. 'To hell....' must have very difficult to write because I had a very hard time finding enough courage to finish reading it. I know Phil and Richard planned this snuff film together with the intention of brutally killing Brennan while at the same time humiliating him in the worst way while enjoying inflicting pain. I am praying it was Al who somehow had something to do with him ending up in the hospital at the end. Who knows, maybe he walked in and knocked Phil out somehow (possibly by injecting him with something) then drove Brennan to the ER and left with Phil for no man's land. Wouldn't it be a cruel twist of fate if Al someone killed himself and Phil so they could be together forever. I was tinking Al might have planned something to get Brennan out before Phil killed him. Plus, why did he wear a condom, what was the reason? That confused me. MADDOX, PLEASE CONSIDER UPLOADING THE FIRST CHAPTER OF PART 2 REALLY SOON SINCE YOU KNOW ALL YOUR READERS WILL BE NEEDING IT AFTER READING THIS. YOU CAN'T KEEP US WAITING, I AM BEGGING YOU. MAKING US WAIT WOULD BE JUST AS HORRIBLE A PUNISHMENT AS THE ONE PHIL IS INFLICTING ON BRENNAN. PLUS, ON THE UPSIDE, IT WOULD LET THE FEW NEGATIVE REVIEWERS FIND OUT THERE WILL BE A GOOD SIDE TO WITT.

Oh my gosh, I knew I should have waited to read the last chapter of part 1 until the first chapter of part 2 was put up and now wish I did. I have to blame it on my morbid curiousity to keep reading no matter what happens and how bad things get. I need to know how Brennan got the hell out of there and is still alive with those injuries. Phil needs to die a slow and painful death - I think him and Richard deserve to be sentenced to death for what they did! This chapter was horrible to read but I got through it because I know (thanks to you) that there is a light at the end of the dark tunnel for Brennan. I noticed we didn't see much of Al in this chapter, was there a reason for that?

Those dudes have to die and I hope they meet their ends kind of like the things that happened in "The Final Destination" movies!!!!

I hated this chapter but the only thing that kept me reading til the end was knowing Part 2 was on the horizon. I don't know how Brennan is ever going to get through all this trauma to his body both the mental and physical damage he has endured. There is no way that they guys can get away with what they have done and I want justice for Brennan. I am trying to figure out who was speaking at the end of the chapter and think it might be his Mom because I would think she wouldn't have left his bedside since he was found. I need to know so update again soon, ok?