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Yea, I was not expecting this for months!! Now, I have so many questions.....what happened to Jason? What are Phil and Al going to do when they find out he is alive? How is his family gonna react when they see him for the first time in months? Hopefully, they will get answered soon.

Wow...Brennan must really be feeling overwhelmed right now. I'm so glad he is in a hospital and the doc sounds like a wonderful guy, he seems to be trying his best to help Brennan feel comfortable right now. I definatly understand Brennan's uneasiness and worry that the doc might be in the organizations. He's probably going to be having those thoughts for a long time huh? I don't think he's ready to want to talk to anyone about what happened and I definatly understand his fear about pictures and afraid of people seeing his brand. makes me sick to my stomach.

I like Dawn but I'm kind of worried for Brennan is he really ready to see his family yet? Hopefully his family will be kind and nice to him...but not in a patronizing mannor, I don't think Brennan would appreciate being treated that way. Anyway this is another great chapter!

i'm very greatful for the early update so thank you, it made my evening :) Now I'll just have to wait for the next chapter, which I hope we the readers will find out how he was found. They had to lift him by air, Phil really did try to hide Brennan didn't he. So since this was on the news I have to wonder if they'll say Brennan was found and if Phil and Al, Richard will hear it and what will they think. Perhaps they'll panic, though Richard really seems to have plans and be well collected where Phil and Al don't. So at least perhaps they will be caught eh? Well have a nice day Maddox. I will eagerly await the next chapter :)

Brennan is a huge surviver. I like the nurses and the doctor. I can see why Brennan doesn't want to pictures taken because someone could be part of the organization that sees the evidence. Now Brennan will have to be detoxed off the pain killers as well as all the therapy he has to go through. I hope next chapter we either get to see Matt or Jason.

Also thank you for the early update. I take it as a week early b-day gift.

Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I didn't know how to express my thoughts after that chapter.

i hope the pain is over for him.
i hope they never get him back
somehow...i really want this to end well

Hi Maddox, you really caught me by surprise with this early update and it made my weekend. I was anticipating meeting Brennan's family and you fooled me yet again because I thought it was his mother speaking to him. So, Phil dumped Brennan's 'body' somewhere in the woods but not deep enough that someone didn't stumble across him. I can't wait to find out the details of who found him and how. I like Dr. Carson and think he's really trying to help Brennan. I am confused though because why didn't they know who he was and why did they have him listed as a John Doe? What happened to Jason, didn't he find someone and tell the authorities? If he did, wasn't anyone searching for Brennan? There should have been an alert on all the police scanners, at least I think there should have been. I know you have a plan and am anxious to find out all the details. I am off to your tumblr now! Huggles, Katie.

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Well I am highly disturbed, and believe me that’s not easy to do. This is very hard to write. I can't believe how dark you actually went with this; I mean I knew it was going to be bad but... I would honestly not have read this chapter if I had not known he was going to survive what they were doing to him. Even knowing, I felt horrible and like I was about to throw up the whole time. Words can't describe how haunting and disturbing this chapter was. Yet it was believable, well written, and psychologically painful. I had to keep telling myself he wasn't actually going to die at the end. I started to panic and feel prickles of terror shoot through my forehead. Which I've only felt once, or twice before in my life. I'll be trying to scrub my brain clean of this chapter for a long time. But even after all that you left us with a little ray of hope in the last lines, which made me feel slightly better. I'm sure this is where he is saved... but there is my doubt gnawing in the back of my head- you never know with this story. So many twists. Though I’m sure it is because it's the end of part one.... I'm very interested to see what comes next and how he was saved; I know this part will be much happier- yet much worse in its own way.
The only thing that was not entirely believable was how hurt Brennen was at the end. How he was stabbed and in his starved horrible physical condition, and that he had an infection and had traumatic rape after rape... I don't see how any human could survive that, he would have to have been rushed to the hospital immediately after passing out to even stand a chance of living... even then he'd prolly be in a coma for a while or something. Though I know it’s for climactic dramatic effect. Then again humans can be quite resilient and beat the odds.
I think this is a great end to the first half though and at least (hopefully) he can start to recover? And have some happiness in his life again. I’ve stuck with your story since the very beginning and I’ll be here till the end! And even then if you write more stories after. Your story is quite enamoring I hope you know. Take care! And I’ll be waiting in suspense till the next chapter.

P.S. Surprised Al actually agreed to off him, and let Phil do what he did, crazy!

So I sat here reading all 21 chapters today, expecting to find another "I love my rapist" fic. Instead I was pleased to find a consistently well written rape/torture/Survival fic that was brutal and yet engaging. Brava to you for taking the path less traveled, or so it seems to me, and not making your victim fall in love with his abusers. I don't do a lot of reviewing, in fact this is my first review on AFF, but I do a lot of reading and this story stood out enough to make me take the time to thank you for the entertainment. I anxiously wait for part two and Brennan's continued story.

your story is the most gut-wrenching piece of fiction i've ever read. i feel like the torture is happening to me. i am filled with dread whenever you update because i know it's going to be so awful when i read it, that i'll feel like i'm taking a trip down to hell, but there's absolutely no way i can stop now; i have to find out what happens. so i just wait until one night when i'm feeling masochistic or depressed and i take the plunge and go through more horrendous torture. it is worth it because it's so real and i know he gets out in the end, otherwise i think this would be unbearable to watch. in short you are a tremendously powerful writer. i will never forget this story. you truly have a gift and deserve to be a published author.

Ooooooh! Way to leave me hanging! Awesome update as always. I'm so excited, this story has really sucked me in. I just know there's going to be light at the end of the tunnel (or keep hoping, anyway).

Thanks for the update, I'll wait patiently (even as I refresh your profile daily in hope) until next month. ;D

OMG. OMG. You're a fucking genius and I hate you so much at the same time.
That last chapter was just fucking AMAZING... and I will be counting the seconds until we get to find out what happened.