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YES FINALLY! I am so excited that he's safe! Hopefully, anyway. Just like Brennan, I'm terrified that people like Phil and Al are just around the corner. And what happened to them anyway? I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Finally! Brennan is safe at least for the time being and hopefully will be reunited with his family soon. I keep waiting for either Al or Phil to pop back in and give me a heart attack but know you wouldn't do that to me. I like the Doctor and think he is really trying to help Brennan plus he is very compassionate and sympathetic towards him. Thanks so much for the fast update and even though I know it's asking too much hope you can surprise us again soon. I want to meet Brennan's brother and parents.

i'll just be waiting in the wings for that moment when someone close to him says something insensitive, like ask him questions i did (e.g. 'why didn't you try to kill your captors while you had the chance?" "did you try to use their phone?" "why not run while you were at the movie park?") heh. well whatever. nice chapter

on a side note, i'm thinking it might be REALLY easy to track down one of his captors - the one who worked at the hospitals. since hospitals keep files on their employees and there can't have been that many in conneticut(sp). so all brennan would need is a stack of pictures of all of that state's hospital workers and he can photo identify one of them :D

Your story really is tormenting me. I actually started reading it a while ago. Althought it is literarily great, it felt to real. So I stopt reading. After a few month I tried again but it was still to painful. By the third time I finally pulled through. Althoght I have to confess I would often change to other side or read something up, because I could bare bare what was happening to Brennan. When the thing with snowstorm came up I thought they were going to cut off his feet. I was relived they 'just' burned his heals. I'm happy he is in the hospital now and can recover physically at least. The mental part at least will haunt him forever. I hope he is only going to see Al and Phil in court, if you drag him back to them, I'm going to hate you really, really, REALLY bad. Don't do this to him, I pleade you!
At the end I'm surprised he wants to see his brother again. I would probably not want any one close to me see me like that.
For the frist time I feel good waiting for a new chapter, because I hope it will be better from now on.

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I am so happy that part one is now over so we can get on to the healing part right along with Brennan. I feel kind of sad that Brennan was all alone in the hospital and that his family didn't even know he was found or alive. I hope they don't hold anything against him for what happened and that they support him. I hope the police find Al and Phil before they hurt someone else. I know Brennan feels ashamed by what happened but his mother and father should love him unconditonally no matter what. Hopefully, the police won't be too pushy with him and give him time to talk about what happened. I really am nervous about his reunion with Matt but think his older brother will be very supportive of him.

Oh, finally, Brennan can start to feel safe again but he can't keep everything that happened to him locked away inside himself. He has to talk with someone about his ordeal and tell the person everything that happened so he can start the healing process. I know he's frightened that someone from the organization will see his brand and let Phil and Al know where he is and that he's alive. If that happens, and they do try something, I hope the police are ready for them. I am worried now that Phil may check Brennan's FB page again just out of morbid curiousity and finds out he's alive. I can't wait to see Brennan's family reaction to the news he's been found and is alive, and what happened to him. I know it's asking way too much from you but really hope you can find time to update again soon before you get too busy with school. Thanks so much.

Oooh, finally!!! I have been waiting for this moment like forever! I'm so glad that Brennan got out of their hands. I'm just wondering what happend to Jason. I really hope that he didn't die in the forest or something, that he got to a hospital. I'm so excited to know what happens next :D Please update soon!

Oh man, this was a very heart wrenching chapter following everything through Brennan's eyes, feeling every emotion, every tremble, the fear, and the one good thing about it is the fact that Brennan is now out of harms way. At least, I hope he is and that Phil or Al stay away from him which they should cause they think he's dead and buried. I still feel so bad for Brennan but the hospital staff seems to be very concerned about his welfare and finding out who did this to him.

First thing is first. Finally! He's out of there physically! =D

Now, that's not to say everything is all rainbows and butterflies, but I'm happy. You're doIng a fantastic job of describing and acknowledging the aftermath of abuse. Putting emphasis that he's not out of Phil and Al's torture mentally is so important and I feel more often than not, that tends to get skimmed over.

Also, the chapter played with my emotions hardcore. I went from happy, to sad, to really fucking sad, to cotent and back to happy and ugh, do you enjoy playing with my emotions? =P
I'm very much looking forward to seeing the next chapters play out. Good luck!