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October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaa this story bleeds angst. It's so amazing. Please update soon!
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October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Back in chapters long, long ago, I was seriously considering not to continue reading this story because it was so damn depressing. I'm glad I stuck to it though because these last few chapters have been amazing. I just can't wait for the next chapter and for the arrival of Brennan's parents. Please don't make us wait long!
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't often review stories but I've found myself coming back to this one over and over again anxious for an update and end up rereading it every time. You are so descriptive with the way you describe Brennan's reactions that I'm mesmerized even when what's happening to him is difficult to read. Can't wait for the second half, really looking forward to him healing and finding some form of happiness, though I'm sure after reading what you've put him through up to this point it isn't going to be easy. Thanks so much for posting.
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally crying with Matt. This story kills me... but it is so good. Great chapter.
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm just a blubbering mess.
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, I was very happy when I heard you had updated, I know I can get a little impatient its only because I'm worried a little about this not being finished. I had a few stories I loved that went on hiatus and to this date they weren't complete.............drives me nuts, that's why I normally only read completed stories, but my friend told me about this story and I just couldn't resist. Though I'll be bummed out so I was happy to hear you were planning on sticking with this story........and you are doing a great job :)especially with keeping people on the edge of their seats.
I liked that the police officers were kind, and that the guy had enough knowledge to know to keep his distance from Brennan. I definatly felt for Brennan since the officer had been on the scene. And then the questioning, to tell the truth I was kind of happy that Matt interupted, which i shouldn't be since I know the questions have to be asked. I just didn't want Brennan to have to relieve it, but he probably will for awhile. So I get what Brennan was thinking, about not wanting to say it outloud.
Two hours of questioning and they were talking about more? my heart aches for Brennan, I did think Matt was rather demanding on Brennan. I understand that he is Brennan's brother and wants answers and for what happened I did think Matt tried hard not to push Brennan. I was happy that Brennan was still able to make a joke. Hopefully he can do that without thinking about acting 'normal'. I was upset about Matt asking about the rape, when he already knew it. But like I said I forgive Matt.
I am kind of dreading his parents coming in a way........ I want to read about them, but wondering if Brennan's ready. Hopefully they won't be pushy and demanding of answers. When I read that part of Brennan looking like he came out of a Hostel movie, it made me sick. I've seen the hostel movies and they're really gory. I hope Brennan starts to heal. I wonder though, how long are they going to have him in the hospital, I really don't know that much about medical, so not sure how long it will take for wounds to heal, I can imagine its for awhile though.
This was another chapter that leaves the question about Jason out there still. I really want to know what happenst to him. I think that is bothering me more now then if the guys get caught. I would hope that you wouldn't be cruel enough to have him be caught by someone who knows Richard. I'm wondering if the all the guys get caught but it doesn't really sound realistic unless Richard is caught but even if he is, (if there really is an organization) surely he wouldn't have met everyone. You did say he wasn't the leader but more of a mentor on your tumblr. (I think I've read it there.) I'm thankful that Brennan told the police about Jason though, that way they will know that Jason isn't dead. But I don't know if Jason's family would be made aware of it??
Thanks for the update and I'll be checking like crazy next month (hopefully on the second which is my birthday lol) :)Take care and I hope you feel better :)
I liked that the police officers were kind, and that the guy had enough knowledge to know to keep his distance from Brennan. I definatly felt for Brennan since the officer had been on the scene. And then the questioning, to tell the truth I was kind of happy that Matt interupted, which i shouldn't be since I know the questions have to be asked. I just didn't want Brennan to have to relieve it, but he probably will for awhile. So I get what Brennan was thinking, about not wanting to say it outloud.
Two hours of questioning and they were talking about more? my heart aches for Brennan, I did think Matt was rather demanding on Brennan. I understand that he is Brennan's brother and wants answers and for what happened I did think Matt tried hard not to push Brennan. I was happy that Brennan was still able to make a joke. Hopefully he can do that without thinking about acting 'normal'. I was upset about Matt asking about the rape, when he already knew it. But like I said I forgive Matt.
I am kind of dreading his parents coming in a way........ I want to read about them, but wondering if Brennan's ready. Hopefully they won't be pushy and demanding of answers. When I read that part of Brennan looking like he came out of a Hostel movie, it made me sick. I've seen the hostel movies and they're really gory. I hope Brennan starts to heal. I wonder though, how long are they going to have him in the hospital, I really don't know that much about medical, so not sure how long it will take for wounds to heal, I can imagine its for awhile though.
This was another chapter that leaves the question about Jason out there still. I really want to know what happenst to him. I think that is bothering me more now then if the guys get caught. I would hope that you wouldn't be cruel enough to have him be caught by someone who knows Richard. I'm wondering if the all the guys get caught but it doesn't really sound realistic unless Richard is caught but even if he is, (if there really is an organization) surely he wouldn't have met everyone. You did say he wasn't the leader but more of a mentor on your tumblr. (I think I've read it there.) I'm thankful that Brennan told the police about Jason though, that way they will know that Jason isn't dead. But I don't know if Jason's family would be made aware of it??
Thanks for the update and I'll be checking like crazy next month (hopefully on the second which is my birthday lol) :)Take care and I hope you feel better :)
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I'm hooked!
I hope things will get better for him and he can move on.
Anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter.
I hope things will get better for him and he can move on.
Anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Eager to read the next chapter.
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My god, how could I have missed the fact that this was updated for 16 days?!
It was another fantastic chapter. I'm so excited that Brennan's been found, is healing.
It hurts a little bit to see how mistrustful, how scared and in pain he is.
Going from the first chapter, knowing that his mistrust only gets worse is hard.
Because I can't help but think that he's going to be okay, that everything is going to be okay.
But of course that's wishful thinking and years of being trained into that sort of thought by less
plotting and devious writers (that is a compliment btw.).
I'm really eager to see Brennan reunit with his family, especially his brother. Although I feel an inkling of apprehension and
sadness concerning that particular meeting with his brother.
The whole ordeal isn't going to be cookie cutter happiness, I couldn't even begin to imagine how that will affect
Brennan, knowing his family knows the grotesquely intimate details of his ordeal, and feeling that him himself has irrevocably
been changed - dreading that things will not be the same.
I'm working myself up here; I will not miss the next update I promise you that.
-Gimlet (cause I can't tell if I'm signed in?)
It was another fantastic chapter. I'm so excited that Brennan's been found, is healing.
It hurts a little bit to see how mistrustful, how scared and in pain he is.
Going from the first chapter, knowing that his mistrust only gets worse is hard.
Because I can't help but think that he's going to be okay, that everything is going to be okay.
But of course that's wishful thinking and years of being trained into that sort of thought by less
plotting and devious writers (that is a compliment btw.).
I'm really eager to see Brennan reunit with his family, especially his brother. Although I feel an inkling of apprehension and
sadness concerning that particular meeting with his brother.
The whole ordeal isn't going to be cookie cutter happiness, I couldn't even begin to imagine how that will affect
Brennan, knowing his family knows the grotesquely intimate details of his ordeal, and feeling that him himself has irrevocably
been changed - dreading that things will not be the same.
I'm working myself up here; I will not miss the next update I promise you that.
-Gimlet (cause I can't tell if I'm signed in?)
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found this story yesterday and stayed up far too late reading it. I just couldn't stop, although I did have to skip some paragraphs which were just too much. I found it in equal parts shocking, frightening and intriguing. What a rollercoaster ride. In my opinion you are a very good writer and I thought it was great the way the sexual content came across as being disgusting and upsetting, and was in no way glamourised. Now poor Brennan is free and I can't wait to find out how and if he recuperates, what has happened to poor Jason and what the reunion with his family will be like. I am really impressed, and I would love to read more. Thanks for this amazing reading experience.