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as always an outstanding chapter again. I'm glade he's eventually getting home. I'm wondering where your going to go with the story now. Will you let Phil and All get arrested and tried, or will their place remain unknown. I'm not even sure if I want Brenna to face them at all at a trial, but at least then he could be certain he was safe again outside.

till next time
reader

I know how upset you get when people ask you to update so won't dream of asking you to even though it would be a very nice gesture on your part and I am sure your loyal fan base following would love you for it. It felt good seeing Brennan finally leaving the hospital and going home but he hasn't made it there yet. I was hoping we would see him stepping through the front door of his childhood home at least. I am very happy for Brennan that he is clean and hope it remains true in three months. I would like to see some closure for Brennan and Jason regarding Phil, Al and Rich, and even Cole. Sam is a true friend and I am glad Brennan has her in his life. Thank you for updating even though your schedule doesn't leave you with much time to write.

THAT WAS THE BOMB DIGGITY!!!! Thank you for sharing once again! read ya laters!

fuck, just fuck- i should have been asleep hours ago but god im a mess-ive gotta find something fluffy to read to floss out my brain-ur very very good-fuckin A+ on writing a incredibly believable story of horror-i was actually kidnapped and raped but it was so benign compared to this- iwas outta of it most of the time and the dude gotta off of me and let me walk out when i said get off-its amazing hhow we deal with traumatic situations-i blamed myself and didnt tell anyone for years even though i got knocked up-i actually forgot about it as weird as that sounds-i remembered i had an abortion but i never thought much about it-im not horrified about it and remember it without freaking but the day i remembered and i wasnt even that freaked-it like was just something i had just not thought about but i went to change my clothes and woke up in the bathroom surrounded by my own blood-apparently i had a dissociative episode and cut the vein in my inner arm-i still dont feel horrified about it-weird isnt it-i did develop a habit of self mutilation-if you ever write another rape scen hears a good description of the actual sensation of being raped-when i woke up with the guy over me-face red with a sexually agonized look on his face it reminded me of when i was little and my grandmas dogs penis had touched me when he was humping me-givng a feeling of physical revulsion-like if you eat straight butter and it gives that weird feeling in your mouth but all over-good job-very believable-i cant wait to read more-this story is way publishable!! im also hoping that when justice is brought tot he fuckers who raped Brennan that they look small and non threatneing to brennan-i hpe that brennan has a moment were he is bigger then them

Hi Maddox.

Man, it get's better and better. your plot works.
The development aspect is just wow really. I love that you are taking your time, and carefully spelling it out.
I know how some authors like to 'fastforward' some parts, I'm glad you didn't.

It's a real experience going through the phases, the journey... the JOURNEY. It's a wow thing.

So glad to see Jason's name mentioned again! Though, it's in a sad light. I keep imagining Brennen going over to where Jason is and punching him in the face one. "How dare you just want to die like that! After all the trouble of escaping!" Then they'd help fix each other up, piece by piece till they're in one piece, held together by gum and tape.
But one piece.

Bren feels like he's still very much - whole. Battered and torn, but still whole. He's just a big mess now, but the hope is greater for him, than Jason.
Jason feels like a huge big hole has been carved out of him, and a big piece of humself isn't there anymore. It's hollow and empty. It's harder to fill in that empty space - than it is to heal the battered and torn bits.

Really looking forward to see where else you'll bring this story to.

Keep it up! Awesome stuff!

- nekoii

This story is really gripping. Like so realistic in terms of mental anguish after being assaulted. Not only that but I never felt so much emotion from this before and so much rage.

I hope the system does get cracked down and those fuckers killed.

I thought story was abandoned it's been so long and was pleased you are still around.

I was so worried that brennan was somehow going to end up back there. Dude ths story makes me so paranoid for Brennan its crazy.

WOW.... Just reading this freaked me out more than normal.... For one thing I live in Vermont and the second thing is what happend to B's shoulder happened to my right leg only after 9 surgerys they had to do a hip disarticulation and for a moment I thought you were going to say he'd lost his arm... and I do mean the same exact thing happened to my leg... I have less than a quarter of it left. Oh and the anitbiotic was call Vancomysin and if burned like a mother... 2nd strongest anitbiotic next to peniclian which is number one according to the doctors here in Vermont. So I'll be reading you laters...

Yes at last an update. This story is very well written. I am glad that it was just an hallucination that Brennan experience it makes the story more believable.
My heart went out to poor Jason I hope he pulls through.
Great chapter can't wait for more.