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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the updates!! I wonder if Talis won't appear on shore :) I'm not feeling the chemistry yet, between Liam and Jonah, which could mean things could work out between Talis and Jonah, OR that something may grown between Liam and Jonah now that creepy clergy is away. Exciting!! :D
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Meep! I take it the clergyman is already onto Jonah and his true identity? I'll have to read the rest later, but I'm enjoying it so far! And I can't wait to find out why Jonah ran from Talis!
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wish death upon Michael. He is simply evil. I hope Jonah can stay hidden from Talis although I wonder why he feels the need to hide. Hopefully you will explain that soon so I don't keep dreaming up possible scenarios.
Update soon please!!
Update soon please!!
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think I like this town :) so cute!! also, sketchy clergyman haha And I can't tell if it's in the innocent/sketch kind of way, or the zomg-run-for-your-life sketch kind... more to be revealed!! :D and Talis perhaps?? haha can't wait :)
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. It sounds like clergyman Michael is going to be trouble for Jonah. He is quite creepy.
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. I love merman stories
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! TALIS!! :D he sounds beautiful! and I actually like the image of the seahorse family :) I'm guessing you also have it to where then give birth as well ;) One of my favorite things about real seahorses. Way to be a team player guys! Anyways, Talis seems fairly kind? I can't wait to see what life was like to have Jonah run away from him (what appears to be multiple times). lol Maybe he's just not that into him?? Idk. Especially since there is a connection the two of them feel. ahhh i can't wait to read more :D
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have made one awesome fic. I haven't seen a merfolk yaoi this good in years. Thank you so much for sharing!!!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh!!! i lover merman stories :D Who is Talis?? why is he running away from him?? cannot wait for updates!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice start to your story. Jonah already seems to be pretty cute. I would love to read some more.