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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I hope you write a follow up story. About their current life, when they first got together and how everyone reacted to them being together.
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October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so cute!!! i feel really bad for jonah for going through all that trouble
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October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is actually some very good writing. Finally got around to reading some of it and can't wait for more stories from you! Looking forward to it! Keep up the good work!
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooo loved this. other than the end seemingly rushed, it was well written. i would love to see how the two continued their relationship after they met and the struggles they had. it'd be awesome~ great work and i greatly appreciate your writing. hope to read more from you!
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lovely story!!! and please do a side one :D i'd love to hear about their romance :D
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would actually like to see Talis and Jonah after this story. With Jonah getting pregnant and a royally pissed of mother in law there is a lot of plot there. Also it would be nice to find out why Talis' mother doesn't like Jonah and what Jonah's parents think of their mating. I imagine there will be a lot of hatred towards Jonah since he got to mate with the prince. There's really a lot of potential for a sequel so I hope to see one eventually.
Thank you! You rock!
Thank you! You rock!
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I hope you will write another story soon!
I liked Jonah. I was suprised of the turn of events, but in a good way.
The idea to write about merman is nice and really unique.
I would like to see a Story about the way Talis and Jonah met for the first time.
I hope I will read a story of you again soon.
I liked Jonah. I was suprised of the turn of events, but in a good way.
The idea to write about merman is nice and really unique.
I would like to see a Story about the way Talis and Jonah met for the first time.
I hope I will read a story of you again soon.
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I have reviewed this story or not, and I have a feeling that I didn't.
And so-
I really, really like your story, it's got my really curious. A lot of about what went on with Talis, of course, and what might happen with Liam.
;)
And so-
I really, really like your story, it's got my really curious. A lot of about what went on with Talis, of course, and what might happen with Liam.
;)
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found this and as I read I started thinking 'who will kill the clergyman?' followed by 'why is Jonah afraid of Talis?'. I can't wait to find out. I am quite happy that Liam's reaction was a good one.
More fic please!!
More fic please!!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a turn of events. Is the clergyman really dead and how will Liam explain his way out of the situation? Or will they just pretend they did not know what happened. I get the feeling that Jonah should go while the getting is good. Michael definitely deserved what happened to him. I can't wait to see what happens next.