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Very nice slow love scene. Now I am really wondering why Gary is so overprotective of Dakota. Maybe Gary needs to find someone to distract him.

Wow, I think Connor is falling for Dakota also! And what, no wanking during the week? hahaha That was funny! :)

Kota is so cute, I could just eat him up! lol

Talk about the great minds... Last chapter was an answer to to my review, and I noticed you wrote it before I did mine. =D Anyway it's really good chapter lot of background. I could just see Connor in his work. That's fits for him so well. Althought I don't like punk at the least. Dakota was just as charming as always. He feels so fluffy and bouncy like a little puppy.
So Cody really turn-out to be overprotective bro. =P Poor Connor got middle but he handled it quite well. Very maturely. I'm so proud of him. His appearance is deceptive. Under all that punk-decoy is really caring mature man. That's just perfect!*squels*
Please, some more!

Thank you so much Laevi for the speady update! It was perfect! Now it's official I'm in love with the both of them. Dakota's naive sweetness and eagerness is wonderful. And Connor is caring, loving and sexy real socknocker! Together they make me giddy. *drools and faints*
But now I'm curious how has Kota managed to be so inexperience. Cause clearly he's a looker so no problem there. Is he just shy, not-interested, does he have a overbearing brother with a complex? Ah, readers we have time to think all sorts of things. =D
Oi author, I hope you will find in you a few more chapters to this fluffy couple. It would be nice to read that they're doing fine and are having spectacular smex 24/7. And that those funny feelings in Dakota's stomach have turn out to be love.

Jesus Christ! Why is Gary so overprotective? Omg, did he kill Joe? Shit, he's crazy! lol

Good chapter; looking forward to more! :)

Great chapter. Poor Joe got beaten up. Gary is quite the overprotective brother there. I am sure he would not get so worked up if Dakota was with a girl. I like the way that Connor kept a cool head when dealing with him. Maybe he can keep Gary from going too crazy. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm liking this story, I like Conner already. His brother is over protective... but it is still nice to have, lets his baby-brother know he cares. I await for the next chapter! Happy Writing!

-RT

Laevi I've read nearly everyone of your stories and I have to say in a non-creepy way I love you, you are brilliant, I absolutely love your characters, they actually have depth to them which can't always be said sadly for other authors characters so big thumbs up for that and I always look forward to seeing new work from you so all I can say really is keep up the excellent work your doing a wonderful job of it so far with Dakota may I say major cuteness factor there XD xx

Hahaha, thinking of granny naked did the trick! lol Too funny!

Awesome new story you have here! :) Can't wait to read more!

Laevi thank you for the lovely new story. I love Dakota. He is so fresh and sweet and eager. Plus the sex scenes were very well done. They have a nice chemistry. I hope Connor will enjoy teaching him all about love. It is nice to find such a wonderful young man before he becomes jaded or hurt by someone else. I hope we get to read more about them.