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by Laevi

schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh that was good!!! i can't wait till gary learns to 'handle' it ;)
person Morgeth
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, you just made my night! I only started reading this story yesterday and I must say I am completely addicted and can't wait to see what happens next. This is officially in my top five stories now! Thank you!
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think my brain just died from the cuteness. Now if only Dakota had walked in on them, then it would have been hilarious.
person kylee123
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joe the bassist LOL. Raven is such a sweetheart. I am glad that Gary will give the relationship a chance. I imagine Dakota and Connor will be quite surprised at this turn of events.
person Susan
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying this story. It's sweet, fun, and a quick read! However, this last chapter, with Raven, is taking it to another level! Adding an additional twist, more characters, and maintaining the wit! I'm looking forward to the next installments! :)
person Samirnie
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Darn, those two are hot!! Thank you so much for the new chapter. It's highly appreciated. I love your fics!<3
person Annabellalee
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I have read almost all of your stories and I love them. But I really enjoy the secondary characters like Gary. I can't wait to see what happens with him and hopefully Raven. Please update soon. Thanks.
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm in love with Raven! "Oh, don't get your knickers in a twist. You're still a virgin." Raven= <3!
person kylee123
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I got a good laugh over Gary waking up naked with Raven. It seems Raven has some pervy intentions towards Gary. It is too bad that Gary is afraid of love. Maybe Dakota will inspire him to take a chance as well.
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck, that was funny! Gary really has to stop drinking and smoking! lol He winds up naked in bed w/his drummer all the time and doesn't even know it! Too funny!

I do like he's so overprotective of Dakota. He's a good big brother. :)