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i really like this story the feel to it, once you start reading you cant take your eyes off the screen, hehe i love the end.

Ahh, what a great ending! Happiness for both couples! And I'm glad that Gary could accept Connor (finally! :))

Awwww, I think Gary and Raven may be even cuter than Kota and Connor!

I feel so bad for Gary; what a horrible childhood he must have had to feel he has to get so inebriated all the time. And he passes out for days on end. Raven is a godsend, I think. Gary should be kissing the ground he walks on. Raven must really love him; who else would take care of somebody like that?

And finally Raven hears the three words he's probably been dying to hear. Great chapter! :)

Aw! Gary's started a new life, with Raven! Loved Dakota's little drama scene, those two brothers are alike.

Thanks for another great story Laevi. Gary can replace his drinking and smoking habits with a new one - sex with Raven. I love the final sex scene. Raven did a good job in making sure that Gary had a very good time. I hope we will get to visit with them in the future. I hope we get to see more of Missing Dreams too. I enjoyed the beginning of that story.

Yeah, Gary seems to have an obsessive personality. What does he do, get so drunk and stoned so he doesn't remember? So he can't obsess? Poor guy. And poor Raven! My God, he's been "having an affair" with Gary, but Gary NEVER KNEW IT!!!! It's so sad; it's not even funny. Gary gets so drunk and stoned he can't remember anything.

I'm glad we got to see a different side of Gary! Now of course he can spend his day obsessing over Raven and their so-called relationship! lol

I was just ready to throw myself to my knees and beg for more of lovely Raven. But you're already ahead of my. Thank you Laevi! Raven is great add for your wonderful sexy men so far. He seems like a hottie with feelings. Wow!
And Gareth you finally got what you deserve...some great piece of man of your own. Excellent!
This was great chapter. Gary checking himself in the shower - I laughed myself silly. That was hilarious. And I totally angree with Gary that he should stop getting drunk and stoned. He's definitely missed some great parts of his life. ;) Or maybe Raven is just pulling his leg and telling what he hope they would have. Either way, I really hope that Gary falls for him. He's clearly in need some steaming smex to get him of Dakota's and Connor's back and on with his life.

Under his tough exterior, Gary is even cuter than Dakota. I think it is so sweet that Gary has had someone to love him all this time without even knowing it. It is hilarious that he has been molesting Raven in his sleep and then completely forgetting about it the next day. I guess he really was spending too much of his life under the influence of drink Love the kittens Laevi. I wish I could have them.

Aw! Gary and Raven are so adorable.

gary and raven is super cute together!!! my god, i can already tell that when they'll have sex, it'll be absolutely explosive!keep up the good work, and by the way, your smutty scenes are absolutely awesome.