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by KerantliDreamer

schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor baby, I'm glad someone was there to wake him up.
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love these intriguing little peeks into your universe. There's always so much more that lies beyond the words, and just captures my interest. Lovely! :D
person JayDee
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sheep - contemporay social relevence, good direct use of the prompt there.
person JayDee
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dream - I wondered if this prompt would have something directly related to your pen name! Instead a scene of comforting after a bad dream that many will find familiar to their own lives in it's tenderness. Nice drabble.
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I don't always want to talk about my bad dreams, either, and what a lovely way to deflect the question!
person JayDee
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nightfall - So I guess her cousin usually butts in with different advice? Must be kinda irritating for Ellie.

That's what I got from this prompt entry anyhow!

schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmhmm, best way to get rid of a bad dream. Nice use of the prompt, it was very slice-of-life.
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kera: sets an interesting story in motion in my imagination. Great job. Brave with the TwitFic! Thanks for sharing, PW
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Wonderful twitfic! You absolutely caught my attention with this one, and made me want more!
person JayDee
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You can link directly to the chapter if you want - you just need to use the url from your browser when the chapter window is open. I started reading and immediately remembered reading the Moon part before :D

Slumber - Nice one. We don't know who they are, but in the 140 characters you both show why she's crying, and have him comfort her. A complete scene in such a short space is very impressive.