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by KerantliDreamer

person JayDee
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Deuced invidious treatment, what? That cove needs a sound thrashing.
person JayDee
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Embrocation - ouch! The pain of the slash and applying the anti-septic cream totally comes through the text.
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I so liked her protective nature, the way she wraps him in the blanket with her at the end as if to keep all the hurt and pain at bay. Very nice!
person yukisan
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Nick. I really liked this one! Great job, Kera.
person yukisan
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
#10, I liked your take on the prompt. Keep it up.
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Once again, a wonderful twitfic and a wonderful giggle, reminding me of all the fun things you overhear when clubbing. :D
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was powerful and tender and sad and beautiful all at once. You've captured perfectly the mix of emotions we all feel when we lose a friend too young, and for no good reason other than a twist of fate and the indifference of the gods.
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
::grins:: We've all had those moments! Very nice, and full props for managing a Twitfic, a feat I find impossible!
person JayDee
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I hope they didn't spend the whole night in there - would have got uncomfortable! No denying they were up to something though :D Nice one.
person JayDee
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nightmare - Hell, that was intense. Your violence is far more effective in 100 odd words than some authors manage in 10000. Definitely the kind of nightmare you're happy to wake from.