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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought the best part if this story was the dialogue between the two, seemed very natural. The kissing was very well described too, I can guess why your big story is so popular! Making the Moon of the prompt connected to the character's life so thoroughly was a good way to use it.
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January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That's my author. I liked it. Short, sweet, and getting them both to their points. lol
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done, Sanura. Welcome to the prompts! I am intrigued by this half-elf and hope to read more, prompts willing. Thanks for sharing, PW
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so very tender and sweet as you bring out the romance between Taess and Keth. It sounds as though they both mean more to each other than they thought they would, and it really touched me deeply!
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Simple and uncomplicated, making for an enjoyable read! You provided just enough information for us to understand, but not feel overwhelmed and transitioned nicely into the romance of it :D