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for The Edge of the World

by MrsOkita

schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this updated again because I enjoy reading this story. I have a feeling that Iriel is going to make Sky do something he won't like instead of having sex with him like Sky thinks.
person doo wacka doo
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Hi", I just wanted to drop in and tell you how much I am enjoying this story. I really love Skylar he is so funny with his flippant 'mouth'.
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see you updated! I've missed these dysfunctional boys! lol

So, finally when Sky is getting somewhere w/Iriel, he pulls away. Wtf? lol

Poor Sky, was he really left besides a dumpster when he was a baby? Who would do that?

Can't wait to read more! :)
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see their relationship progress a little bit in this chapter. I have a feeling the sexual tension is going to skyrocket after this. I can't wait to see how the event will go especially now that they both know there is something there.

Update soon!
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No no no no! I wasn't ready for the chapter to end yet >.<
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! I hate that I waited so long to read it, I'm looking forward to the next chapter >D
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. And so did my neighbors as I told them about it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! How can Sky NOT think Iriel had a thing for him? Even if you're drunk and go to kiss someone, chances are you really want to do it, right? lol

I was really sad to hear about Finn. What happened to him? It sounded like Sky never really got over him. And I didn't realize his relationship w/Kael was only a month. Altho they are best friends, right?

Anyway, that part was really depressing. Maybe Iriel can bring Sky out of his "funk"? :)
person Carissa
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I felt really bad about what happened to Finn and how Sky was afterwards. You wrote it in away that I could almost feel his pain. I like the way you write. It makes that story more realistic. I thank you for sharing this wonderful fiction with us.

Update soon please!!
person vicxn
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love it xx