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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
... So, will they finally have sex, or will something interrupt them (hope not!)? Nice chapter anyway, and it's nice to see another side of Valentine's personality. :) I'm also looking forward to how they'll manage their daily life with their new and improved relationship. And how will their various friends react to the news, for that matter?
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the banter you have got going on between the boys, Sky's dry sarcastic internal dialogue is hilarious!!! Looking forward to some hot dominant Iriel action next chapter!!!!!!
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is still alive, how exciting!
I agree that maybe this particular chapter doesn't live up to some of the previous ones, but on the other hand, "not as good as the others" is still a long way away from "bad". I enjoyed it. Although I do have this feeling that they won't make it to the bed... whether because something happens, or because they get carried away before they get there, I don't know. I hope it's the latter. :P
I agree that maybe this particular chapter doesn't live up to some of the previous ones, but on the other hand, "not as good as the others" is still a long way away from "bad". I enjoyed it. Although I do have this feeling that they won't make it to the bed... whether because something happens, or because they get carried away before they get there, I don't know. I hope it's the latter. :P
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey welcome back Sigh-Ren! And it's about time! lol I really missed this story. I missed your other one too and I noticed you took it down to concentrate on this one. I hope you'll continue with that one too. I'm sorry but I don't remember the name of it. :(
Anyway....I thought this was a good chapter. Both Sky and Iriel seem to be having similar problems with their emotions and the way they act out at each other.
Sky's inner monologue is so funny though; he just cracks me up! :)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Anyway....I thought this was a good chapter. Both Sky and Iriel seem to be having similar problems with their emotions and the way they act out at each other.
Sky's inner monologue is so funny though; he just cracks me up! :)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I really enjoyed this story, I hope it hasn't been abandoned. Skylar keeps making me laugh and I'm curious to find out what's up with Iriel. Is he just scared to get hurt or something? He needs to get a grip!
I really enjoyed this story, I hope it hasn't been abandoned. Skylar keeps making me laugh and I'm curious to find out what's up with Iriel. Is he just scared to get hurt or something? He needs to get a grip!
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April 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I don't know where I've been, but I had TWO delicious chapters to catch up on! lol
Yes, they are dysfunctional, but that makes them all the more real!
What is Iriel's deal though? He's always the one coming on the Sky (even in his violent/domineering/controlling way) and now he's like mush. hahha
Great chapters; can't wait for more! :)
Yes, they are dysfunctional, but that makes them all the more real!
What is Iriel's deal though? He's always the one coming on the Sky (even in his violent/domineering/controlling way) and now he's like mush. hahha
Great chapters; can't wait for more! :)
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this is a good story. i just found it and read every chapter posted so far, hope you update soon!
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this chapter! Such a touching scene XD I'm glad to see this updated again :)
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Skylar is hilarious!! And the tension between them is sooo good...but I wonder how much longer before Iriel finally breaks? XD Great chapter, can't wait for more :)
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've discovered this last night, n gobbled it up chapter after chapter. Seriously good. I think thr title put me off it at first because I assumed it was gonna be a parallel universe type of thing n I'm not into those, so when I read the summary I was pleasantly suprized. Love sky, his bitchiness n sarcasm included. Cannot wait for the nxt chapter, n hope that what Iriel wants to do with his tight body involves hanky panky n not actual physical labour.
Has iriel lost a loved one? Like sky? I'm thinkin that's probably the common ground Che'y was talking about?
Has iriel lost a loved one? Like sky? I'm thinkin that's probably the common ground Che'y was talking about?