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for Cracked Halo

by Earadiel

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schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
title rocks, 'give me your ass' ROFL end to the chapter.
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story so far. I am a little confused b/c Mac originally said Eric knows he could never have him the way he wants him (or something to that effect), but at the end of the chapter, he's getting what he wants. So, are they best friends w/benefits, or is Eric really in love with Mac?

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And btw: I don't think you need a beta; your writing is really good and I didn't notice any typos or grammatical errors. :)