rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this story. I'm glad it was an actual story instead of a load of smut. You have talent, and I bet you could easily write your own sci-fi novel with great characters and background story. :)

Absolutely Fantastic. Sequel? (babyz would be also be great)

You know, I'm really surprised you don't get more feedback - you have a real talent for prose. The details were good, you had some lovely similes, decent character development. Sure, it's just a one-shot, but still, I think you did a really good job with it - and your alien is sexy. Godzilla, indeed. I thought the scene where he got to come to her rescue and scare the piss out of that human robber was just great all around. And mmmm, long lizard tail. Man. Makes me wish there were aliens here for real. :P

Anyway, good work. =)

~Moonstar