rate_review Reviews

Not a flame BUT...if you broke up your paragraphs with spaces in between, the story would be a little easier on the eyes. :) You have some good description going on and a promising start, but cleaning things up a bit for appearances sake really does make a difference on a story's effect on a reader. (Also, if you capitalize the main words in your title "Darkness of Night" it will look more appealing/professional and thus more attractive to readers.)

Good luck with your writing!

~Moonstar