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for Neko-laus 3: A tale of two kings

by kiix

person circe266
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Lady Dalia? Rescue mission? Leaking citizen chip? The plot thickens . . .

I love how you are setting up the drama and future direction of the story. Keep up the great work!
person fanny
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hnnngggg. This chapter was full of actiony pew pew. :3
I caaaant wait for the next one? Are they gonna let the black shirts find 'em and fix 'em? So dramatic. :D
I'm gonna put your muse on crack so the next chapter will come out with the quickness.
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ouuuh noooooooooooeeee~
what's wrong with neko?
This fight. has brought to light (for me) just how many claws this little kitty truly has...
ALOT.
and how many injuries he's already sustained too.
and I knew it! that 'Lady Dalia' is the 'bride to be' or some thing. but what the heck was she doing, barging and trespassing like that. now all her soldiers are dead thanks to her. some reckless no-brian decision she made, what ever it was.

wonder if they'll find her. more like who'll find her, somewhere in the bushes.
and Neko too. he definitely won't be fit for marriage anytime soon, not with his head like that...

- nekoii
person fangirl
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving the update! Nice and long. <3
Our little neko is growing up so fast! C:
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 & 4. Woot! I've finally got time after work to read. Yay! Loving how the story's developing. I can see the new girl being the bearer of the next heir in line. Now is she the one or will there not be a girl involved? OOOOOOO Go Maggie go! Do your best and beat the saeoidj out of those invaders! Wendy shall back Maggie up and then Neko goes in for the kill. Woot! These two chapters really made my day. Now off to read some more! Thanks so much for the updates and know that it's greatly appreciated!!
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am gonna assume... that, that girl neko served the knuckle sandwich to, will end up being the mother of his children....

ok gtg! *rushes off*

- nekoii
person circe266
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, another chapter! Those tigers really need to develop some social skills. I wonder if the girl could be Nicky's future wife . . .
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! So happy about the update! I love how Neko takes care of his boys and in the same token they take care of him too. He seems to be trying to ajust to the whole prince thing but I guess we will see how that goes. I can't wait until the battle scene! Until next chapter! BTW can't wait for Cinder to come out!
person Orkchild
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story every chapter just makes my day.
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's a blizzard alright. it's freaking cold. and its 3am and my idiot neighbor above me is playing on the piano. psycho.

and WE ARE GOONNNNAA HAVE SOME WAR!
i wonder thou, will the tiger's teacher's be happy with it?
i mean, they are teaching the tiger's control, and here, the tigers are gonna LOSE CONTROL and go fire crazy. yay?

and Neko... neko..... neko.... leader of them skullz has kicked his brain back into gear? :) good job kitty! keep it up.

now let's see yeah what happens next? xD

- nekoii