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by kiix

schedule August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well done Neko. well done.
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! an update. THANK YOU! I was so excited to see you updated this story. I absolutely love Nicky/Neko and Maqs, and even Wendy. I can't wait for them to go back to the Shambles and see Grim again. I was wondering if that girl the knocked out was going to show up again later. Interesting. Wonder how the wives thing is going to work out. Can't wait to read more (so please don't make us wait too long for another update? Pretty please?) Again, thanks so much all the hard work. It is appreciated.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wife no.1 ... Haha.... WIFE!? goodness, arn't you appalled Maggs?
And suddenly out of the blue wife 2 and 3 dropps out.

I was so right about the Shawalle princess, thou, its rather rotten to treat your own family like that dude. You suck! What the heck sort of uncle ties and gags your niece and marries them off just like that! *wants to smack someone*

Okie. hope Neko gets that rotten ice chip out of him. soon!
person Orkchild
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want to reach out and pick up Neko and make it all better.
person circe266
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I absolutely LOVE King Ahio -- "I've yet to see a bull drop a calf." LOL, can't argue with that.

I look forward to your next update. While I can't wait to see Grim again, something tells me that removing that thing in Nicky's head is not going to be easy. Or pleasant.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update! Great chapter per usual!
person Mya416
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm still getting caught up on the neko-laus series, but I have to tell you - I don't think you could ever write a bad or mediocre story. :) I love this series too - although the lord vampire emperor series shall always be my first love of your writings.
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Nicky and Mags. Hope all is well with you and PLEASE update soon! I just realized I never reviewed after the last update (sorry. I meant to, but was out of the country when, with sketchy internet, and forgot when I came back). The oracle's prophecy...hmm, interesting. Please give me more. Oh, and I can't for Nicky and Mags to see Grim again (time for more lessons? *smexhinthint*
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
confused, don't know who is the panther, who is the king or what is the neko prophecy and wendy gettign smex is not happening*sad*
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Grim? The King of Beasts?

Really now...............

What did little Vi mean by "You are a father" does she mean that Neko's gonna have children of his own, or are his people his children. Hm. Hm. Hm. Well. Well. Well.

this is interesting. and I'm still wondering about that girl they had tossed into the bushes. xD

- nekoii