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for Neko-laus 3: A tale of two kings

by kiix

schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To much talking you bet~~~ so much is going on so suddenly! For how long have Neko not been in the same room alone with Mags? This is blasphemy!!!
NOW WHAT?! NOW WHAT?! IF Neko breaks MAg's heart, he might go all magic crazy!!! Then how?!?!?!

Phew............ now... just who might be that... lucky...? girl.............. hmmm~

- nekoii
person lyr
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this but I hate that Neko and Mags may have to separate. I hope something can be worked out so Neil won't have to give up Mags. I really like them together. And what's with Mags teacher? And how long before someone teaches the man to catch? I also hope someone give Wendy and Mags some actual combat training because without magick they are defenseless. I wonder if Neko can find a woman like him that has some bite to her. Then I might be okay with Neko's marrying the wench.
person NessaC
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very excited about this. Although the whole marriage duty reminds me a bit of what the Brotherhood faced in LEVS.
*Sending virtual chocolate mousse cupcakes*

~Spirti xx
person Gnome
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you do it, my dear. It's taken me a while to catch up with your work, but it's captivating. I bow before you. I wish words came to me as easily as they seem to come to you.
person kageacat
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeee~
I'm excited to read more :D Keep 'em comin'!
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Yes, Yes!!!!
person athenaartisan
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So when are you going to get this series published? As much as i would miss reading it for free. I am willing to spend money on it. It is just that good. Thanks so much for keeping it going. I love Neko/Nicky usually i go for more submissive mellow ukes but i just love is sarcasm and "If i'm going to die i'm taking as many of you with me attitude."

I really cant wait till your next installment.
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*tackles kixx* woot! yay! i'm so happy!!! you've done more than made my day with this first chapter of your two kittens!!! *hugs*squeeze* woot! i'm anticipating more chapters from your creative mind and please, take all the time you need to bring your stories to life. greatly appreciative of your quick updates and stunning chapters. keep up the great work!!
person J42
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, Thanks! Nice start - for our spunky cats. :-)
person orkchild
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. If the empire only knew what they were in for they would turn tail and run like smart prey. But they just have to see themselves as an apex preditor. Boy are they going to regret it.