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for Neko-laus 3: A tale of two kings

by kiix

person crazeme
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just what I needed to break my homework craziness. I love Nicky's take charge and kick butt attitude and that Mags and Wendy just fall into line with out question. I can't wait to read more. I absolutely love this story and it just keeps getting better and better. Please update soon.
person circe266
schedule February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I love a take-charge Nicky. How perfect that his street gang experience in the Shambles is helping him to hold the crown in the Wild.
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woot! thanks for chapter 2 kixx! <3333~ i don't like duty. duty sucks and if i was neko, duty still sucks after wards. xD and poor maggi learning everything from square 1. wendy is doing well, though i think he also needs a a squeeze toy tat he wants to keep. thnks 4 the update n keep up da great work!
person asialisek
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooooooooh so very very very very very veeeeeeeery happy that the tale continues~~~ *goes on to devour!!*

<3
person asialisek
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM

this would be solved relatively simply if everyone were hermaphrodites........... but i DO suppose we'd loose a modicum of suspense in that case.

pff..
**frumps** still.. who'd want to sleep with a girl, eh?

LOL
;D
person mashael
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you made my day with this!
love nicky talk and thought :)
person kissedbymidnight
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! That kind of worries me. Poor Neko. He is loyal only to Mags now though. Maybe he can be sneaky somehow and bypass it without bloodshed? Or maybe the Oracle didn't see what we thought she saw? Hopefully Neko and Mags get a happy ending. The poor things deserve it.
person Samirnie
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear Kiix,you've been in my Favorites Writers in AFF-folder since I found your tentacles-fic. That was so good - partly disturbing (at the beginning and in the kidnapping part) and but good anyhow. Congrats for publishing it.
Day before yesterday I started to read Nekolaus-saga and I was totally captivated. There're so many great characters, my personal favorites so far have been Grim and Elway. I shared a few tears for him but Nicky's had to do it.*sigh*
But now this new part seems really interesting. Poor Mag has to learn his magic lessons. =) And I'm so happy for Wendy! He should reap happiness and self-esteem. And our sweet dear Neko... Yikes! Bad kitty, no bating. As I was saying, our cool sexy on the leags Nicky..Hmm, he's got himself quite a tight spot. To becoming a King, husband and father... That's a chunk to chew on. Wouldn't like to be in his paws. Hang in there Nicky!
I'm really looking forward your updates. Thank you so much for the splendid work!
person circe266
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you are going with this. And I LOVE Nicky's mother, and their interactions.

I hope that Nicky finds a tough chick to be his consort (a female Nicky!?!). Not sure if you ever go this way in your writing, but a three-way relationship with Nicky/consort/Mags would be very hot.

I look forward to your next chapter.
person Toni
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO! Nicky will be with no one else. Damnit. I refuse to believe it. You get him out of that or so help me I'll... I'll... I'll do /something/
:D other than that, plain awesome.