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for Neko-laus 3: A tale of two kings

by kiix

person m_kren2
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love love this story it is grate,
schedule March 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woot! So disappointed that the story has to end and I'm greatly satisfied with the way that it ended. I can't wait for this to be published. I want my copy. Beautiful, beautiful work. Thank you so much for a great adventure with Nekolaus and his Tiger.
person Rose
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
dear magnificent and oh so great kiix
-I've been reading and following your stories for a while now and I'm sorry I only reviewed now...
so now I want to tell you how awesome your story is!! it's brilliant! I like how you portray Nicholas as rough and tough but still somehow manage to make him cute and him and mags are such an adorable and kick-ass couple!! I've been following this story for months now but felt really bad cause I couldn't review such a wonderful story! I've wanted to say how awesome this was for so long that I don't know what to say a anymore... but if I get around to reading it again, I'll have another chance at reviewing it! oh and at first and I mean during the very first chapter you wrote about nicholas I really disliked grim but towards the end he somehow managed to become an endearing character and I was irritated at mags at some point too and I was just at awe at how well-made and fascinating nicholas was oh and I love how he's compared to cat ^ ^. There were a lot of times we're I was gritting my teeth and practically shouting at my laptop because of how tense and just great a certain scene was and sometimes I'd even laugh out loud reading it! during the first chapter I was a little hesitant about reading it but when I started reading more, I got hooked! your writing style is very nice and easy to understand but very detailed in a way that just sucked me in! The setting of the story was well made too, so much that I can imagine walking through it while reading the story and their surroundings and background were really fascinating and the character build-up is easy to follow and very interesting. Their world is ever changing and alive and the characters move freely in it and it doesn't become stagnant and no matter how long Ive been reading it there isn't a time that I was ever bored and instead every time I read it I was always on edge and its like opening an awesome gift on christmas all the time!! I love how they're so... concrete and believable and the flow isn't confusing either. so yeah, now I'm going to wrship you and maybe build a shrine since I can't grovel at your feet for this wonderful story ~~
-with love and everlasting admiration
your reader/stalker/admirer
person Rose
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey its me again, I just read the epilogue... it's done already? waaaaaaaaaaaaah TT_TT and I love it toooo... definitely reading it again... yep! he's HAPPY!! waaaaaaaahh!! I love those guuuuuys !! they will forever remain in my heart...♥
just a super mega ultra galactic and out of this world wonderful story! I looove you~~ thanks for writing such an awesome story, know that you have given me and definitely others a great experience by reading this story!
person asialisek
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo o o o oooooo aaaaaaaawesoooooome!!!!!

☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆
person addiena saffir
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so sad to see this end. :-( but so happy to see them happy. yayah
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww love it...will there be another story?
person circe266
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Truly excellent epilogue. I love how you tied up all the loose ends and gave your characters the lovely, sweet happy ending that they deserve. (The kittens! Grant & A pregnant!)

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story. Reading it has given me so much enjoyment!
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
amazing as always sweetie so glad that ended on a happy note :)
person clovermax
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Still wish they could have destroyed the empire. oh well.