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for Kyrie Eleison

by OdessaMadlock

schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good start to a potentialy very very good story, keep up the good work, cant wait for the next chapter!!! :)
person Qiana
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story I hope you add more
person Joy
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you have to continue this.
person BlackHeart
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
>: It's a terrible situation for the poor boys, but I'd like to know what happens next and where they're being taken!
person B.Darcy
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's funny because when I read the title of this story I immediately had a flash back to my days in a choir when I once had to do this song 'Kyrie Eleison' at a cathedral and I could really visualise the pretty Anglo Saxon choir boys from the names that you've given them. Good job! d(^_^)b Then, there's the fact that it alludes to the movie adaption of 'Lord of the Flies' where a bunch of young boys (probably of a similar) age are stranded on an island - makes me wonder if there are going to be any in-fighting and survival-y type stuff going on.

The story that's going on between Evan and Tibby is so sweet! I'd love to see it continue. And I really want to find out what happens to the other boys... Again, Good job! d(^_^)b
person wynja
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, love it! I've been looking for a really dark story... I'm looking forward to more!
person uni
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad and dark. I feel bad for those boys :/ and really hate those men. Will definitely read more if you post it!

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