rate_review Reviews

Gah! You can't stop there! That's torture. Ok, ok, I get the chapter things, I get needing to have time and inspiration to write. I just feel really bad for all the boys right now, Rocky especially, but Jack and Tiran as well. Please keep writing.

so far so good!! by the way, i get the feeling that rocky 'feels' something for jack. OH and the questioning about jack's love life?! AWESOME! i was so excited, then was groaning and desipointed when the subject ended too quickly. I mean come onnnn! i wanted more details ;)

oh.... for some reason, i found this chapter to be really hot...well jack in particular. He's always portrayed at the dominant, but that's usually in actions concerning the boys. However when he was so firm on leaving and wouldn't even listen to tiran...for some odd reason, i found it to be very very hot ;) Scene with rocky and jack are always good. I like the two of them together... not that fond of tiran though, mostly because he doesn't understand jack's value. Also think that sal needs to have a bamboo stick shoved up his..... I just hate the guy. Not to mention, HOW dare he do that to gabe?! And tiran not even knowing about it? ... makes me hate tiran even more, not to mention he's still loaning out gabe, now just to a new guy. Anyway, absolutely love the story. Hadn't reviewed for the past chapters because i don't come to the romance section often. but can't wait for the next chapter. I had the same thought as jack when he said that he'll stay, that after that 'goodbye', "coming back" was going to be awkward.

"Meeting" is such a brilliant chapter. Rocky's insight into Tiran is probably the only thing that could have convinced Jack to stay.

I can't decide whether to admire Jack or hate his guts. He's such a hard ass, with everything about him defined by his being a dom.