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I've read all the chapter today and I love this story! It's interesting how you deal with everyone's psychology and I feel you're presenting this in a real way. People struggle with these kinds of things and you're giving it meaning and merit. Also, the end of the last chapter - with them talking about high school - was very funny, and I like Cali alot.

I'd love to see more.

Lol, what happened with this chapter? xD Sorry, but this is too difficult to read. I'll check back later to see if you spaced it out :3

It feels like we get to see a bit more of Danny’s temper. I like that. Poor Josh seems to bear the brunt of it. Though, he does seem to like it… I’m still surprised Danny didn’t react more on hearing this guy is in love with his boyfriend. Lol, doesn’t even seem to annoy him. Imagine that.

I do think this story is very well written, but I don’t know how much longer I can keep on reading it. There are three big things that make me turn away from a story. Girly boys, calling people condescending words like slut or whore, and more than two people relationships. Funny thing that those are the things I can’t handle, but that’s how it is. Though I can somewhat handle the last one, the first two is just not working for me. Poor Josh. To think he’s the one who’s too much for me, lol. Anyway, good luck with the rest of the story :3

When I came to the ”Oh, Holy, no!” I was full out giggling.

Oh my, there sure are some strong personalities in this story. A violent sadist, a very crazy obsessive masochist and now this new thing. What do you even call that? Public humiliationist? Lol. They all just keep piling up, ha ha. This story makes me think about all the different non- main stream funks floating around out there. Personally, I think the absolute weirdest one is gore, but heck, there is still so much I don’t know. Back on track. I was surprise Danny accepted the idea so easily. Was it because he was so tired? Is he still thinking about leaving Ashli, or has he changed his mind? Is he really okay with inviting his lover’s ex lover into their own lovemaking? Won’t that make him jealousy? Insecure? Angry? Ashli’s already mentioned he’s okay with sharing, but what of Danny? I really like Ashli. He seems very crazy, and I also like how obsessed he is about Danny. He is a bit thoughtless. In a story, that always liven things up :3 Josh, I don’t know about yet. Only time will tell ;P

I’m looking forward to the next chapter :3

I usually don’t like female character, but Maria I adored. I love how you’ve managed to give every character a clear personality. They really feel like different people. I love how scatterbrain, energetic and original Maria is. Ha. Also, this new person, Josh, from his reaction and considering Ashli is his ex, must be into BDSM too. Still, I can understand him freaking out from reading that journal. Wow. That stuff Danny likes. Freaky xD Josh really should be concerned about being added into this new threesome thing. Lords. Danny will get sooo mad. At least I think he will. I sure would if my boyfriend invited a third person into our love life without asking me, as a nice little present for slamming me into a door. Ha ha. That’s just so funny. Well, if it happened to me I would more be frothing than smirking, but still. I’m really looking forward to see Danny’s reaction. He already wants to leave as it is. Oh, and as long as I remember. I think Ashli was very sweet in this chapter in his respecting of Danny’s privacy. That he knew about the journal, knew it read about him, and respected it enough not to look. That he even protected it and refused to hear about it. I loved that.

A little side note though :3 When you switch from writing about Ashli and Josh to writing about Danny, it would be good if you made a break of some sorts like “*****” or something. Just so the readers know we’re jumping. That’s just a little tip. It makes that reading a bit easier. I think you are a wonderful writer, and that would make you even greater :3

I’m really, really looking forward to the rest <3

Oh, wow. A third person? What makes him think Danny is gonna stand for that? And the third being Ashli’s ex at that. Wow. He even promised away the cat. Dannt’s gonna kill him. Lords. I can’t wait to see where all this is leading and what will happen next.

Aw ;A; Who knew I’d find such a messed up BDSM couple this cute? I love that I can feel for both of them. Danny feels so scared. It must be awful to be scared of the one thing that makes you capable to make love to your lover. And Ashli who wants all of it and wants Danny for who and what he is, who’s longed for a person like Danny, can’t make D understand that. It’s sweet and sad and brutal all at the same time.

I like this story so much. It’s so original, one of a kind. Every new chapter seems better than the last. The most important thing to me in most stories are that the feelings come out as real, if not I can’t continue reading it. Well, that and angst >:D In this story, even though I’m not into BDSM, I can really feel for these characters. Their struggles become mine, sort of. :3

I’m eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :3

Ha ha, Ashli owned in this chapter. The best part is when he screams that that isn't to go through recepies, ha! I also love that the sadist is the bottom. I think this chapter was the sweetest so far :3 I'm looking forwart to more <3

I've never read a story like this before. It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to read more :-)