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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly an interesting post-sex conversation! lol
Hope everything works out once Janny moves in!
Great story! :)
Hope everything works out once Janny moves in!
Great story! :)
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, the restaurant idea sounds great! It does take a lot of planning, time and resouces to open up a restaurant; I hope it works out for them! :)
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April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Shit, what did they do, fire Ashli?
The whole dynamic of the three of them is so amazing. They're all so different from each other. And they all interact with each other differently. Why is it only Danny and Janny, which seems more common. Maybe b/c Ashli's always at work? Then Ashli and Janny, Ashli and Danny, but not the three of them together. I don't mean all sex, but just hanging around, or playing Danny's games?
The whole dynamic of the three of them is so amazing. They're all so different from each other. And they all interact with each other differently. Why is it only Danny and Janny, which seems more common. Maybe b/c Ashli's always at work? Then Ashli and Janny, Ashli and Danny, but not the three of them together. I don't mean all sex, but just hanging around, or playing Danny's games?
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, I can't stop laughing! Shelly is such a fucking hoot! Omg, she had me cracking up! She's the coolest of mom's EVER!!!!!!
And of course I would love to see the three of them get married; what a riot THAT would be! lol :)
And of course I would love to see the three of them get married; what a riot THAT would be! lol :)
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think Josh's parents are a hoot! Especially his mom! And I can so see her liking Janeatte as part of Josh's personality.
I also loved Ashli's simile (is it a simile or metaphor?) to boyfriends relating to ice cream. I suppose it's true! :)
I also loved Ashli's simile (is it a simile or metaphor?) to boyfriends relating to ice cream. I suppose it's true! :)
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So is Ashli disappearing again? Where was he that he wasn't home at 3 am? lol
Cool game that Danny and Janeatte (did I spell it right?) were playing. At least they got to learn more about each other.
Although I'm not too fond of pissing on the floor! lol :)
Cool game that Danny and Janeatte (did I spell it right?) were playing. At least they got to learn more about each other.
Although I'm not too fond of pissing on the floor! lol :)
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March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm….. You should go back and reformat the chapter (like your other chapters) trying to read this made my eyes hurt.
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March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What's a tithe?
I think Danny's mom took it rather well that he wouldn't be coming home for Christmas.
I think Danny's mom took it rather well that he wouldn't be coming home for Christmas.
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a creepy dream; it totally confused me! lol
It's interesting how the dynamic of Ashli and Danny has changed since Janeatte (I don't remember which way his/her name is spelled! lol) came into the picture. A third person will definitely put a different spin on things!
Good chapter; looking forward to the next one! :)
It's interesting how the dynamic of Ashli and Danny has changed since Janeatte (I don't remember which way his/her name is spelled! lol) came into the picture. A third person will definitely put a different spin on things!
Good chapter; looking forward to the next one! :)
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story! I got as far as chapter ten, but I wanted to review. Very interesting story; I definitely don't like the S&M stuff, but your writing is really good and the characters are pretty funny.
I also have a wonderful cat named Cali, but I spell is Callie. She's a calico and also loves to hunt for mice.
I just wanted to point out two things in case you wanted to go back and fix them. In the first chapter where Josh (great name btw!) is renamed Jeanette, you spell it Jeanette. But in all the other chapters that follow, you changed the spelling to Janeatte. Also, when Danny is peeling the apples, you spelled it pealing, not peeling. That's all.
Anyway, great story! I'll have to finish the other two chapters tomorrow! I was actually reading your story when I was supposed to be watching wrestling. Your story is definitely more exciting! :)
I also have a wonderful cat named Cali, but I spell is Callie. She's a calico and also loves to hunt for mice.
I just wanted to point out two things in case you wanted to go back and fix them. In the first chapter where Josh (great name btw!) is renamed Jeanette, you spell it Jeanette. But in all the other chapters that follow, you changed the spelling to Janeatte. Also, when Danny is peeling the apples, you spelled it pealing, not peeling. That's all.
Anyway, great story! I'll have to finish the other two chapters tomorrow! I was actually reading your story when I was supposed to be watching wrestling. Your story is definitely more exciting! :)