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by Celery22

person Anon
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool. It's nice to see some plot 'round these parts. The characters we've seen so far have been pretty interesting. What's the deal with Tabatha? How'd she scare Courtney off? Speaking of Courtney, I get the feeling there's more going on with her than meets the eye. Hope Lily doesn't turn into a douche when she finds out that Becca is gay. And Becca REALLY needs to learn how to check girls out more discreetly. Like, seriously.

Can't wait for more. This was really good so far.
person fantome1
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, very promising.
person RadAmber
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I read both chapters and I can already tell this story is going to be amazing! Update soon please
person CandyCaner
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Update soon, please? ^_^
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
keep writing good story