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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fuck I'm hungry. I want a cheeseburger also!
Well damn......what a great ending! I knew Ty was gonna try and kiss Roarke! lol
I love this story! Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, double check your to and too's; you're getting them mixed up! :)
Well damn......what a great ending! I knew Ty was gonna try and kiss Roarke! lol
I love this story! Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, double check your to and too's; you're getting them mixed up! :)
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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is yet another amazing story from you! Love them!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter three. Old Timey Diners ROCK!
And Ty and Roarke aren't bad either.
And Ty and Roarke aren't bad either.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Promising first ;) chapter, I'm looking forward to the actual chapter two.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this is off to a good start. There are a few things, though, that you should know: 1) it says this is chapter 2, which was mildly confusing and easily fixed and 2) shots in a bar run around $5-6, so even if the guy drank a few, it'd be a fairly good sum of money. You have a few grammar mistakes, but those are easily fixed. I think this has potential, though, and can't wait to see what you make your characters do. ^^
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written and I really like this story. I love the end of the chapter as well and I can't wait to find out what we'll happen next. Update soon.
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great start to an awesome story! I was waiting for the moment when the hungover guy came in. lol I was predicting they'd meet again. hahah
Can't wait to read more! :)
Can't wait to read more! :)
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So Roarke sounds like the cutest guy in the whole entire world. I am really looking forward to see where this story goes. Please update soon!!
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo, I'm interested!! I'd love to read more~
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was so good! I was surprised that Ty remembered drunk-kissing Roarke! lol
Now they get to find out more about each other on the car ride home.
Can't wait for the next update! :)
Now they get to find out more about each other on the car ride home.
Can't wait for the next update! :)