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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Srry, haven't logged in. This story is pretty sound. Other than flushing out the sentences to be full it looks pretty good. Probably getting a good beta to help flush those sentences out would help this story improve. ^^ othewise, I'm looking forward to more chapters for this story!
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story so far! I'm intrigued and I want more :D Looking forward to the next chapter!! >;D