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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, great new story ya have here Aiko! :)
It's funny how Shane thinks Kian is a thief and not his new maid. lol
Great start! :)
I'm looking foward to more!
It's funny how Shane thinks Kian is a thief and not his new maid. lol
Great start! :)
I'm looking foward to more!
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really cute.. please continue
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's funny, you should continue.
In making it funnier;)
In making it funnier;)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it and hope you update regularly. I just noticed a few spelling mistakes (but you explained why in your note)so overall very good. I am looking forward to next chapter.
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd say continue, but only if you get a beta or relly apply yourself to editing... it's pretty hard to read sometimes. A tip: read the text out aloud or use a software which does that for you. That might help you find some of the mistakes. There are free "text to speech" programs, and if you don't want to download one, Adobe Acrobat, which most computer has, has this function, all you have to do is save your file as a pdf-file.
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi again! Just saw the note that English is not your first language. It's not mine either, but the "reading aloud" thing really helps... as a good Beta does, because he or she will make you correct all your mistakes AND explain them, if they occur a lot... good luck with writing!
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I'm exited to read more :)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great start!
(but you need a beta :)
(but you need a beta :)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You better update quickly!
I cant wait to hear more about Kian and how be became a maid, and why the hell was Shane wearing pink panties with little red hearts on them?!
I hate cliff hangers....
I cant wait to hear more about Kian and how be became a maid, and why the hell was Shane wearing pink panties with little red hearts on them?!
I hate cliff hangers....