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Well, even reading this chapter for a second time made me cry. It's so sad what happened to Kian and Mia's parents. And poor Mia, had to assume all the duties of a mother. That must have been so hard for her and probably filled her with a lot of resentment towards her parents. Even though she of course knew the accident wasn't their fault; but deep inside, knowing that she has to come thru for her brother and herself. It's a huge responsibility for a young girl.

Anyway, I'm glad we got to see a bit into Kian's past.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

oh this was so sad poor bunny. I missed Shane in this although i wonder what he will say when Ki stops paying attention to him.
Please update soon

The struggle between love and livelihood. Ouch. I totally got this past chapter. Though I missed Shane's end of the continuum. I suppose that may be coming next? Pretty please :) Somehow, despite all his good intentions that his "bickering days are over", I don't see our passionate little maid managing to keep that front up forever. He doesn't seem to have sold out to a life of survival. More like give me passion and love or give me death style to be honest.

So, curiosity, does Shane even remember his last maid? Or was she so good with the servant end of things that she managed to be perfectly invisible. Does seem possible.

So your characters wander around after you to? I enjoy hearing other writers talk that way, because for years I thought maybe I was slightly crazy. I don't post here, not that kind of writing, but thank you for those tidbits of insight into your creative process!

Waiting for the next move and grinning like a cat with cream. Keep writing! Thanks!

omg the story is so nice and interesting, please write more O.O

I adore your characters. I love how kind and sweet they both are even though they don't really show that side. It is a little weird tht you retell the hole store from the opposite point on view but in this case that works really well.I would love to see what hapens when the bitch is gone, i want them to get all domestic. Kien is adorable.
I adore this story and i must say is one of my favorites atm.
Your update made my day.

Still enjoying this story, gah, these boys have some chemistry and its high in humor! I love it and that girl...I've met girls like that. I'm a girl and I hate them! Very realistic. So,. I hope she goes home and her phone numbers get deleted and she never torments another poor cook!

Oh, and someone needs to stop bringing home girls when he has a perfectly hot date. But I'm sure you're getting to that, and I'm more than willing to leave that in your capable hands however long you choose to torture these beautiful boys. They're yours, of course! I'm sure the ride will be fun!

The moment in the kitchen, touch on the neck...purrrrrfect ^_^

Kian is so adorable Shane is so hot yet thick headed. Clarissa is a total bit** I really hope Shane doesn't sleep with her. Please update soon cause I really love this story. Thanks keep up the great work!!

I must say I find it amusing that Shane dont know the feeling of being in love. Like both Shane(even if he's a bitch) and Kian. Keep up the good work

Omg, am I ever hungry!!!! That recipe sounds delish! Ooops, I think that's the wrong chef, doesn't Rachael Ray say that? I don't know what catch-phrase Jamie Oliver says; never watch those cooking shows! lol

What a BITCH that Clarissa is! Shane should have kicked her out the door as soon as she wouldn't eat the pea soup! lol

Great chapter! Looking forward to more! :)

And great new name, btw! :)

Love it!!!!!! Yay for new chappie^.^ I loved the line about how shanes attitude sucking like a vaccume cleaner^.^ made me laugh. Only thing I will point out was that iN the sentence "“I am so sorry dear; I was lost in thought.” I didn’t understand why, but when I we held our gaze my mind was blank" you have two pronouns, I indicating yourself, and we Indicating multiple people, so I would suggest getting rid of one so that it docent sound weird. Cuz you don't usually find two pronouns side by side in a sentence unless they are separated by a comma, for instance 'you went with me, she went with her.' as opposed to 'you went with me she went with her' other than that I loved it~ what was Kians ring tone anyway? I am just curious. I now kinda wish I could meet kian if only to eat his food, sounds sooooooo good~ shanes date was really rude and someone shoulda slapped her in the face.....