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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Whether Baisyl is a man or woman, he and Kedean make an adorable couple. And the sex scenes as Fem!Baisyl are expected and still kinda hot. I am looking forward to when these 2 find out Baisyl's preggers, I wonder who's gonna make the bigger scene.
I love this story to pieces can't wait for more :D
I love this story to pieces can't wait for more :D
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I understand that het sex is not your fav, BUT I think you executed that last scene splendidly!
Additionally, I am interested to see how you explain why Baysil can still be pregnant as a guy? All those necessary internal parts suddenly gone...
I would be satisfied with simply deferring to a magical excuse, but you probably have some fancy, amazing explanation in that fancy, amazing imagination of yours ;)
Can't wait until next week!!
XOXO
Additionally, I am interested to see how you explain why Baysil can still be pregnant as a guy? All those necessary internal parts suddenly gone...
I would be satisfied with simply deferring to a magical excuse, but you probably have some fancy, amazing explanation in that fancy, amazing imagination of yours ;)
Can't wait until next week!!
XOXO
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. Another amazing chapter. <333
Since you've never written explicit het sex, I feel obligated to tell you that while I've never especially enjoyed reading het sex... this particular scene, perhaps becase, as you pointed out - Baisyl is still male - is still REALLY appealing to read. So. Well done! It's hard to make het sex appeal to the m/m fans... and you've done it with ease.
The fluff was a nice change, and while I'm looking forward to plot advancement... I'm also quite looking forward to the additional smut in the next book. :DDD
Since you've never written explicit het sex, I feel obligated to tell you that while I've never especially enjoyed reading het sex... this particular scene, perhaps becase, as you pointed out - Baisyl is still male - is still REALLY appealing to read. So. Well done! It's hard to make het sex appeal to the m/m fans... and you've done it with ease.
The fluff was a nice change, and while I'm looking forward to plot advancement... I'm also quite looking forward to the additional smut in the next book. :DDD
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love ,love,love this story!!! I have never enjoyed a story in my life as much I enjoy this! Your ability to portray the depth of emotions startled me! I'm hooked! Please ,please don't stop! I will wait on pins until the next chapter!!!
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how even a drunk Baisyl is able to seduce Kedean into a smutty alleyway hookup. They are so cute together.
As for the other brothers. Rhyan is as adorably bossy and pompous as Baisyl and it is so fun to see him giving Zyric a hard time. Can't wait more for more. This story is amazing.
As for the other brothers. Rhyan is as adorably bossy and pompous as Baisyl and it is so fun to see him giving Zyric a hard time. Can't wait more for more. This story is amazing.
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:O Is he pregnant? :)
I'm sorry but I have to say it every time : I love this so much!!
I know I sound like a giddy fourteen-year-old about this story but I don't regret it, it's one of my favorites ever. :D
I'm sorry but I have to say it every time : I love this so much!!
I know I sound like a giddy fourteen-year-old about this story but I don't regret it, it's one of my favorites ever. :D
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm, also I wonder how it's gonna be with the pregnancy, like this: they're gonna figure it out, Kedean's gonna be overprotective, but still the story's gonna keep happening in the present, and then the baby will come near or at the end or in the epilogue? haha, Baisyl as a mom! He's gonna freak out when he finds out...
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wrote because of your promise of porn, plot, and long chapter, hehehe. So.... does this mean Baisyl will be pregnant soon? It does seem the plot is taking us that way. And I'm glad that Baisyl's mother actually loves her sons. But I must ask, does Myles come from the same mother as Baisyl and Rhyan? It's not really a review, just a commentary of the story. I hope that's OK..
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, very clever trick you played there with Baisyl and Keeden and what I imagine will be the impregnation.
Love, as always. Maybe this within week review thing could be maintained? That would make me the happiest
girl in the world :)
XoXo
Love, as always. Maybe this within week review thing could be maintained? That would make me the happiest
girl in the world :)
XoXo
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol, there`s totally nothing to worry about Kedean. Oooo I just can`t wait til he finds out, and this was such a good chapter. The lemon was oh so juicy it made some great lemon YUM! So hopefully you update soon pweas so I can get my dose of Kedean and Baisyl. Oh and I want to know if this is going to be like a regular pregnacy or if it`s gonna be different. Like shorter time until the birth and such. But great chapt can`t wait for the next one YAY :)