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Awesome, Loved the sex scene glad it was raining lOl I really hope that the curse get's lifted I really like Baisyl as a man you know. He seems to.....well.....feminine as a woman LOL.

1&2 Wow. I feel said for Baisyl. I read the one shot with him, and I like him as the manly man that he is heh heh, I'm mad that somebody cursed Baisyl because of his father though urgh, and it's real sweet of his brother to offer to marry Baisyl. I feel sorry that every thing was taken and to be honest that curse should have been placed on Baisyl's father not him. *sigh* Oh well, life ain't fair.

I'm glad he'll get turned back into a man though.

CrimsonWatersAlien

Thank you for the explanation! I understand you're logic perfectly!
Another update, another great day ;) Can't wait for the next one / book two

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About Baisyl's dream on previous ch, can you tell me if it's a precognitive dream or not? I'm afraid that Baisyl will reject his own child once he know he's pregnant, and although some part of me understands, I really don't want that to happen :( It's ok if he's confused and conflicted, but I hope in the end he can love his child....

Yay new chapter! I loved all three parts, oh, but what will happen next? *bites nails* and I wonder why is the magic getting stronger, because of the baby or is it maybe because of Loveeee... haha. I wish they could just accidentally meet their brothers on the street while going to the meeting with the captain :D! I can't wait for the next chapter...

"it's magic" the answer to many a thing we wish to do but have no logical answer on how to accomplish. ah how i wish it would work in real life. lol

Thank you for answering both in the story and in the author notes! I loved the dream, we can see he already loves the child :), and Baisyl and Kedean are wonderful (as always). Can't wait for more :)!

I started reading this story just recently and really enjoyed the writing style and characters. Unfortunately, I find myself becoming too estranged with the storyline to continue reading. While I was lured in by the idea of a man being trapped in a woman's body (temporarily?), I find myself growing uncomfortable with the oncoming pregnancy. I liked how true-to-character you kept with a man being physically trapped in a woman's body and still being very much a man in spirit. Birthing a child and pregnancy, however, are very "feminine" things, they change a person into a "mother". I can no longer see him as a man, or as the character I started out loving. Anyways, I wish you the best in your writing but this just crossed a "weirdness" line for me.

Loving this story! Really like Baisyl - he's quite the interesting guy!
And the opening to the latest chapter had be squealing (in my head) ^^

This was a beautiful chapter and if anyone is squicked by what happened in it they need to get their head checked. I mean, preferences are one thing, but to actually be grossed out? Come on.

One thing though, I hope Baisyl's nausea came with being hungover and wasn't a hint at a pregnancy, because morning sickness usually comes -as one of the first signs, too- about six weeks in. The guy should be completely fine and oblivious for the next month or so.
Unless, you know, dragons. You can explain everything with that. ;P