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January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story and the characters more and more. Baisyl and Kedean are so insanely cute together.
Oh man, Zyric! The cavalry got there not quite on time. I'm now desperate for the next chapter. Amazing story. I genuinely love everything about it, even if I'm crap at writing reviews. Keep it up!
Oh man, Zyric! The cavalry got there not quite on time. I'm now desperate for the next chapter. Amazing story. I genuinely love everything about it, even if I'm crap at writing reviews. Keep it up!
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And not only because it's long (something that is a definite bonus point in my eyes), but also because you have characters! Not figures with a name and a face, but persons with feelings and past lives and future ones and views and minds of their own. Something, sadly, many stories are lacking with (even 'professional' written ones). So: thank you for this story! Xie xie ;)
I do have some questions, though: Will we read more about the world their living in? I'm asking, because I'm still a bit puzzeled how everything works: is it a pure fantasy world with no technology? Or is it like in the dark ages? (But then again, that restaurant scene in chapter 25 doesn't really fit in the dark ages. Which, btw., in my eyes you pulled off really good, 'cause usually a restaurant scene in a fantasy novel comes off as totally artificial, or is your typical bar/pub scene)
And I wondered: Natara said that Baisyl comes off as tight lipped about his emotions. However, while speaking with Kedean Baisyl is generally very open. So... is it just Natara that misjudges Baisyl? (Of course, he has good reasons to be tight lipped around her, right ;) )
And because everything should end on a good note: I love the humour and your writing style in this story. And the long chapters ;)
I do have some questions, though: Will we read more about the world their living in? I'm asking, because I'm still a bit puzzeled how everything works: is it a pure fantasy world with no technology? Or is it like in the dark ages? (But then again, that restaurant scene in chapter 25 doesn't really fit in the dark ages. Which, btw., in my eyes you pulled off really good, 'cause usually a restaurant scene in a fantasy novel comes off as totally artificial, or is your typical bar/pub scene)
And I wondered: Natara said that Baisyl comes off as tight lipped about his emotions. However, while speaking with Kedean Baisyl is generally very open. So... is it just Natara that misjudges Baisyl? (Of course, he has good reasons to be tight lipped around her, right ;) )
And because everything should end on a good note: I love the humour and your writing style in this story. And the long chapters ;)
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Man, I didn't want to bore you and ask every three days: When's the next chapter coming? When? When? Wheeeennnn?????
But I'm eagerly awaiting...I really hope you'll continue, I'd be kind of heart broken if you don't!...PLEASE! *cries*
I loved this chapter :)...mating ritual you say? I was suspecting it was something like that. Rhyan and Zyric are so fucking cute...how will they be saved? (I'm guessing it would somehow seem Zyric is officially dead or something like that so the prophecy goes as it was said...idk)
P.S. If I don't reply when you post something next I probably just don't have internet access.
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But I'm eagerly awaiting...I really hope you'll continue, I'd be kind of heart broken if you don't!...PLEASE! *cries*
I loved this chapter :)...mating ritual you say? I was suspecting it was something like that. Rhyan and Zyric are so fucking cute...how will they be saved? (I'm guessing it would somehow seem Zyric is officially dead or something like that so the prophecy goes as it was said...idk)
P.S. If I don't reply when you post something next I probably just don't have internet access.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i loove this story so much :)) will Baisyl keep the child when he finds out? or will he choose to break the curse and get rid of the child? or or.....i have so many questions!! please update soon pretty please with tons and tons of cherries on top!
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man was I happy to see when this chapter came out. Gosh their brothers are going to be punished and killed oh man. But I loved that you finally reasoned out that mystery of why Baisly is jealous and not just because of the obvious. I can't wait for the next chapter it's gonna be great. :)
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank GOD. I was really started to worry that you'd gone an abandoned us.
Finally nice to see our boys understand what's going on a bit.
Finally nice to see our boys understand what's going on a bit.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story don't get bored with it. It is certainly different and very good compared to the other 80%
of poor boring stuff on AFF. The tale has enough meat in to last at least 25 more chapter. I want to find out if Bas gives birth to a baby dragon? LOL Gslinger
of poor boring stuff on AFF. The tale has enough meat in to last at least 25 more chapter. I want to find out if Bas gives birth to a baby dragon? LOL Gslinger
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful new years gift!!
Dying for more!
XOXO
Dying for more!
XOXO
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December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It made me so happy to see that you updated! It's been forevvvveeeeerrrr! I hope you feel more inspired and start writing more often. I'm incredibly excited to find the answers to the remaining mysteries. I can't believe there's only a few more chapters left!
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December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(son of a witch) MERRY CHRISTMAS........HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!!!! sorry just had to get that out! This story is getting most interesting, sorry about not reviewing every chapter, but I've been having trouble with the two words at the bottom. *shrugs* Anyway this is getting very interesting but I can't wait till Baisyl is a dude again.