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for The Coquette and the Thane

by DaggersApprentice

schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHH it was said out loud it was said out loud write faster

Awesome chapter as always; I really like your writing style; I LOVE Baisyl, the little bitch; love Rhyan too, and now write fasteeeeeeeeeerrrr pleeeeeeeeeeease.
person Nage
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I've just discovered your story and oh how I love it. I stayed up til 3 in the morning to finish and you know, I think the part where you experience writing het sex is kind of important. It showed how Baisyl trust Keadan, really trust him with everything.

I really love it. I'm still rooting for a baby here and Rhyan's love story (weird, I don't like Alroy right from the 1st chapter) =3 So please, don't abandon it, please continue this wonderful plot and tell us what'll happen next >,<
person dysnomie
schedule March 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story over the span of two days... It's wonderful, so far. I really enjoy your characters, they are all so individual. I hope you're still planning on updating this!
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
update update update

If not (yet), I hope all's good in your life...
ok see ya. :) xx
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll update soon...
Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

:)

xxx
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I sort of want to see Rhyan and Zyric get their act together and stop fussing around. But I guess they HAVE only known each other for a few days, huh?

In response to your response to a review, I think it's quite obvious that Baisyl is, for the most part, still the stuck-up, condescending princeling. Yes, he cares about Kedean more than he's used to, and he's seen a couple of things that made him think, and you can tell that both of those things are affecting him- but he's not turned into a different person. At all.
And I can definitely see him being a little tight-lipped around Natara. ;P
person RJaneyP
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great AND EXCITING cHAPTER, please don't end the story too soon... I'll miss it! It needs to be published big time, it sure would make a good anime. And characters are excellant and interesting! I want more. G
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I like Zyric and Allroy better than Zyric and Rhyan??? Another wonderful chapter!
XOXO
person Cole
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Garfruaghswoshf. More.

XD

I started reading this... three days ago? But yes, anyway, there needs to be more. I demand updates everyday.
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, if you say so, but I'll just gently plead if I ever see fit, now that I know you don't mind :)

I'm happy that you posted a new chapter! And that they're saved, I can't wait to see how the brothers reunite! Awww.

"There are a number of things I've kept from your brother for some time which, given the circumstances…perhaps should no longer remain unspoken of…"

I'm wondering what and is it just about Alroy or... Kedean and Zyric?

They're being incredibly sweet again... :)


Waiting for the next one! xx